Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

Beauty, Before Me

"Stay with me through the darkness 
  until we find another sunny day."

Dodge through the rain drops falling fast
jump puddles not worrying about getting wet
take my hand and my heart, come hold me close
embrace my imperfections and this life we have chose

Slip-slide down this path of resistance with me
being my rock  when tiny pebbles roll free
help find my sun hiding when all seems lost
don't let me go under without one last gasp

Of the beauty, before me, that surrounds
cherished in precious seas of love found
golden flowers sway gentle in the breeze
carrying off splendor for us to forever see

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Joanna Daniel April 10, 2017 at 10:00 AM Now for such a love, ah! Lovely, Tim:)

Arthur Vaso April 8, 2017 at 10:17 PM Its hard to find someone who is willing to go through the bad times for the good, that for sure is true love!

Sara Ella April 6, 2017 at 7:01 PM A beautiful poem Tim <3 This is what love is all about :)

Scott Thirtyseven April 6, 2017 at 8:56 AM Now that's love.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 6, 2017 at 7:23 AM - Beautiful love, Tim - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Marie Coreggia April 5, 2017 at 10:45 PM This is a deeply moving love poem, almost like a supplication. Amitiés

Andrea Dietrich April 5, 2017 at 6:30 PM This is gorgeous writing from you, Tim. A SEVEN.

Lisa Ricci April 5, 2017 at 4:28 PM Good Evening Tim. In my eyes, I see poetic perfection. All elements are present. Truly stunning to the eye and ear. Well done entirely and an honor to read.

Doug Vinson April 5, 2017 at 3:48 PM Dang, Tim, you have the feeling. : )

Chris Green April 5, 2017 at 3:37 PM What a beautiful rhyming poem of love. This is a heart-toucher Tim.

Jean Murray April 5, 2017 at 3:21 PM They don't make men like you anymore Tim. In my locality it's my reality that romance is dead.

Jan Allison April 5, 2017 at 2:27 PM Beautiful and uplifting Tim I love the embrace my imperfections line ... so important to accept each other's differences in a relationship for it to truly work;-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop April 5, 2017 at 2:11 PM This poem lifts up our spirits.It is so beautiful Tim..We all need that someone special we can count on in our lives..especially when its rainy...and darkness falls.Fantastic.A fave

Darren White April 5, 2017 at 1:59 PM Everyone deserves someone to look right through imperfections, right into that wonderful big heart they possess. Beautiful poetry, my friend...