Beautifully Arranged

"beautifully arranged"

as we inhale and exhale each others desires
like a feather our love carries us through
lifting each other with winds of passion
time and again drawn like a magnet hold

apart hours move slow as our bodies cool
moments pass fast to the warmth of touch
from that one fine day of first encounters
life has changed and beautifully arranged

SkyWatcher
03-25-22


note:
I know
another entry of romance
but why not (smile)
have a beautiful weekend everyone
thank you
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Baker Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 4:15 PM
I can always use another romance poem, Lisa. The warmth of words and expression of passion always bring back many wonderful, shared moments of loveA poet friend in Texas, Bill
Ricci Avatar
April 11, 2022 at 10:57 AM
Hello Bil - Hi. You have me smiling. Thank you for that. Yes, always is it time for a romance entry. I always say love is one of the heartbeats of poetry. I once again am sorry for this late response. I hope all is well. I look forward to returning to your page very soon. Have a wonderful night. Blessings
Romios Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 8:13 AM
Well done, I say Viva Romance. This type is my favoriye. Thank you Pangie....
Ricci Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 8:38 AM
Top of the Morning Pangie - Hi. Thank you once again. Truly. Where would we be without love? The last couple of days I had a moment or two to write and post before I lost concentration time or energy. I will be visiting your page very soon. Have a beautiful day. (smile)
DiMino Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 8:29 AM
Love the image and the words. Find myself lately watching many of the old movies from the late thirties -- love the hairstyles and silky appearance of the clinging gowns (my wife often telling me silk was made for women to dress naked in public); men dapper, in suit and tie -- A meditation...guess I am stuck in the past -- wanting less the present and nothing of the future I see. Lovely read! Thank you.
Ricci Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 9:58 AM
Hello Joe - Thank you ever so much for your wonderful review and commentary to which I very much enjoyed. I'm with you, I would rather live in the world of yesterday and reflect of better days instead of living in the world we are living in now with so much going on in the world and with continuous news that is filled with sadness and violence. I very much love Turner Classics with the true beauty of hollywood etc. Have a wonderful weekend. Keep enjoying poetrysoup and the days of yesterday too. (smile)
Poet Avatar
March 25, 2022 at 12:21 PM
as we inhale and exhale each others desires. Such stunning metaphors about passion are so deep. Well done Lisa. Blessings
Ricci Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 3:16 AM
Hello Scotto Poet - Good Morning. Thank you very much for referencing my words. You review and commentary and most generous. May all know of love. Enjoy the weekend and poetrysoup as well.
Green Avatar
March 25, 2022 at 10:50 AM
Definitely romantic and so, so beautiful. This is what love feels like. Really nice my friend.
Ricci Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 3:13 AM
Well Well Well - Hello Stranger - Good Morning Chris - Thank you for stopping by and seeing this entry. I hope life is treating you well. Coming from you I am honored by your review and commentary. Truly. Thank you very much. Remain safe. Blessings always (smile)
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