Beautiful Spring Days

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~Beautiful Spring Days~ (Triple Tanka) Spring is beautiful Trees happily come alive Flowers again bloom Butterfly hummingbirds fly Spring is a sight to behold Springtime's beautiful It's a time to look forward Nature's renewal With new hopes and lots of dreams Springtime's a lovely season The skies seem bluer Days now are more beautiful Your face only glows With happiness in the sun And in your eyes just joy shows. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 January.09.2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2016 7:59:00 PM

oh you are so ahead of winter with this one!! Lovely set!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/11/2016 7:26:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Andrea,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I deeply appreciate it.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D

White Sage

Date: 1/9/2016 5:06:00 PM

excellent write Dorian

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/10/2016 1:25:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly WS,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I deeply appreciate it.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D