Beautiful Sight

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*Inspired by photo of sunset taken nearby shown at this link. The sun goes to rest With color spread far Across the lake's ice From shore to shore A winter day ends With beauty, nothing more As if peace is frozen in the moments of winter's air Brightness sets into The darkness of night Leaving the best to offer With this beautiful sight Heidi Sands 2/25/18

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Silent One

Date: 2/26/2018 10:02:00 AM

You do not need images, your words create vivid imagery...

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/26/2018 1:30:00 PM

Thank you Silent One. I never figured out why the photo I took and uploaded shows on my end, but others cannot see it.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/25/2018 11:27:00 AM

I do not see the photo; but the poem is beautiful as is...with evening sunset colors and silence of the frozen scene.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/25/2018 11:31:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. and Thanks for letting me know. I don't know why I can see the photo on 2 devices, here, but other's can't see it. I appreciate your comment! :)

Joseph May

Date: 2/25/2018 9:47:00 AM

A sunset frozen in time...beautiful write Heidi...

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/25/2018 9:51:00 AM

Thank you Joseph. I was just able to get the photo added, now.