Premiere Contest WinnerBeautiful Rose


              Once, I grew in a garden,
        but, now I am part of a death bouquet;
     on top of a coffin in a funeral home,
        I suppose it is an honor but I feel doomed.

  People passing say we are beautiful roses,
  (not for long I am thinking);
    then, a fragile, gentle hand touches me,
  and pulls me away from the others.

              A girl strokes my petals,
        and holds me to her cheek;
     I feel her tears falling on me like rain,
        all day she holds me tightly in her hand;
  often kissing my petals.

  That night, she places me in a glass vase,
    and I hear her weeping in her sleep;
  in the morning I am a little droopy,
               just a little weak.

        I cannot hold my head up,
      but she calls me beautiful still;
         each day I am fading, withering-  dying,
      and I know my end is near.

  Soon my petals fall, fall, fall
  and the girl picks them up-  each one;
    putting them in a pretty bowl,
  and that is how it went-   'till;
              more of me became petals,
       until there was no flower left.

     Yet, the girl still touches my fading petals,
       and calls me beautiful though I am decay
  I want to tell her that beautiful is not my name,
       I whisper to her-   my name is love . . . 

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July 7, 2020


Poetry/Personification/Beautiful Rose
Copyright Protected, ID 20-1266-602-03
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France


Written for the PREMIER contest, The Flower, The Thorn or Both
sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Sharma Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 8:03 PM
It's beauty is extraordinary. Congo for your well deserved win.
La France Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 6:18 PM
Asmi, thanks for the compliment and the congrats _Constance
Mishra Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 4:29 AM
I love this heartwarming tale of love wrapped in eternal beauty of care. Congratulations on the well-deserved trophy for this soothing verse Constance. Blessings and love :)
La France Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 2:47 PM
Aditi, thanks for the comment and the congratulations, I love this poem of mine, lol _Constance
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 12:45 PM
This is very touching and beautiful Constance. It is very worthy of your wonderful Trophy win! Congratulations my friend. Blessings xxoo the captcha says CRY
La France Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 3:54 AM
Connie, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations_Constance
Mcintosh Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 6:59 AM
Congrats to you, dear lady and I was so sure this would be a top winner - so happy it was. Love and prayers and YES... please do submit your poetry for a book and I promise to buy a copy :)
La France Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 3:55 AM
Gina, thanks for the congrats and the faith in me, all I need now is the courage _Constance
Daniel Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 3:06 AM
Splendid personification of a rose, Constance, congratulations on your top win:)
La France Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 3:55 AM
Jo, thanks for the congratulations, it was fun being the rose even though a sad rose _Constance
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 7:30 PM
Touchingly expressed, Constance, strung beautifully to its conclusion, my compliments on your deserving TOP win, blessings indeed -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William
La France Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 8:48 PM
William, thanks so much for the compliment on my poem, appreciate _Constance
Mcgee Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 2:16 PM
I totally loved how you pulled it through the sad to the love. Great poem. congrats on the top win.
La France Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 8:49 PM
Jeanne, thanks for the comment and the congrats _Constance
Dutta Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 1:35 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Hugs
La France Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 8:49 PM
Anisha, thanks so much for the congrats _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 10:15 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a "Beautiful" write. You are so right, that must be what the rose must say. Enjoy your win and day.............
La France Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 11:30 AM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment, appreciate _Constance
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July 12, 2020 at 6:56 AM
Beautiful penning Constance, so beautiful. I felt that. Congratulations on your trophy win, so well deserved. xomo
La France Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 11:31 AM
Pigeon, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Warrior Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 3:56 AM
Congrats!! dear friend...Awesome poetry...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)
La France Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 11:31 AM
WW, thanks for the congrats, the compliment and the love and hugs _Constance
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July 11, 2020 at 11:40 PM
Constance, this is beyond tender and expresses the self giving of love. It reminds me of Shel Silverstein's The Giving Tree. Congratulations on this amazing poem. DeeplyTouching. Blessings my frined.
La France Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 11:33 AM
Sam, thank you for the lovely comment and the compliment, this is true in a sense as I took a red rose from the top of my mom's coffin and have kept it all this time, although it is just dried, withered dark petals now_Constance
Chiri Avatar
July 11, 2020 at 6:19 PM
Congrats on your first place!;)
La France Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 11:34 AM
Brenda, thanks so much for the congrats !! _Constance
Mcintosh Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 9:10 PM
This is a absolute miracle in the making, my friend. Your words touched my heart and soul with their beauty and images... such a amazingly awesome write!! A sure fave that I'll come back to again and again. I simply love this! You should have this published in a poetry book!!
La France Avatar
July 10, 2020 at 12:29 PM
Gina, thank you for the compliment on my poem and for the lovely comment and the FAV, maybe a poetry book is the next step for me _Constance
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 12:17 PM
A beautiful personification for this contest, Constance. I love every line. Good luck...blessings, Rhonda xx
La France Avatar
July 10, 2020 at 12:30 PM
Rhonda, thank you for the beautiful and love _Constance
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