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Beautiful Love Story

Through good times and bad
I knew our marriage vows
would stay true, it’s amazing
how quickly years flew by
and I still adore you

Something Beautiful 5 line rhyme Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Charles Messina

10/31/21

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Krish Radhakrishna

November 13, 2021 at 12:06 AM

Congrats on your win with this love poem!!

Paula Goldsmith

November 12, 2021 at 10:09 AM

Congratulations on your win. "Wonderful" Have a blessed day with your win...............

Ann Peck

November 12, 2021 at 8:48 AM

I'm so happy for you and your husband! It sounds like you've managed to ease into the years, regardless of good or bad. Congratulations on your win!

Edward Ebbs

November 11, 2021 at 4:11 PM

Sweet Kiddo, Congrats! Ed

Karen Jones

November 11, 2021 at 12:00 PM

LOVELY! Congrats on your win!

Sam Kauffman

November 11, 2021 at 10:14 AM

What a beautiful tribute to a lifelong marriage. Inspiring and a model to follow! Congratulations on your win! Hugs!

Linda Craddick

November 11, 2021 at 8:38 AM

I love this! How fortunate to still feel this kind of love through the years. Congratulations! Linda

Joanna Daniel

November 11, 2021 at 5:10 AM

Amazing, your love story, Jan:) congratulations on your win:)

Charles Messina

November 11, 2021 at 2:09 AM

This is so beautifully written, Jan. I just adore it! Congratulations on your 1st place win! Hugs// Charlie

Lisa Ricci

November 5, 2021 at 6:41 AM

Good Morning Jan - You have penned a healthy and beautiful love. May all know of your words and of such a love. Thank you for sharing. Have a great day.

Jenna Logan

November 4, 2021 at 4:25 AM

Love, sweet love. It’s what the world needs now.

Bill Baker

November 1, 2021 at 4:01 PM

WOW! The poem was short and sweet. I have a feeling that line fits you as well :-) Thanks for attaching the lovely song. I'll read more of your poems when I get a chance. Your post history is quite impressive. I'm new, Just 1 week today, so trying to get as many poems as I can out there :-). Following you now.

Connie Marcum Wong

November 1, 2021 at 2:05 PM

So beautiful Jan! Both your romantic poem and Perry Como’s love song. Thank you for posting both. Have a great week my friend. Blessings xxoo

Caren Krutsinger

November 1, 2021 at 11:05 AM

This is uplifting Jan!

Rico Leffanta

November 1, 2021 at 10:51 AM

Finally an upper! Aloha!

Harry Horsman

November 1, 2021 at 7:05 AM

Something beautiful 5 lines. You surely achieved that Jan. Wonderful poetry.

Mike Gentile

November 1, 2021 at 4:00 AM

So sweet Jan! Happy Monday xdxoo

Victor Buhagiar

November 1, 2021 at 3:58 AM

Love as it should be. Hugs.

Jennifer Proxenos

November 1, 2021 at 2:28 AM

Wow Jan, this is amazing ad so romantic. If I am watching a movie reading a book or a poem I love happy endings that vow eternal love, in fact I am a real sucker for these type of declarations of love. Enjoyed reading this poem Jan good luck in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Delice Arleen Skelly

October 31, 2021 at 9:52 PM

Romance at its best...Delice

James Peranteau

October 31, 2021 at 8:20 PM

that's all i need is more reminders how beautiful love iz...*sm...you have set off mine muse alarm dear poet! ty, sweet write..have a wonderful week...much love, james