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Beautiful Love Story

Through good times and bad I knew our marriage vows would stay true, it’s amazing how quickly years flew by and I still adore you Something Beautiful 5 line rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina 10/31/21

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Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 11/13/2021 12:06:00 AM

Congrats on your win with this love poem!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/12/2021 10:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. "Wonderful" Have a blessed day with your win...............

Ann Peck

Date: 11/12/2021 8:48:00 AM

I'm so happy for you and your husband! It sounds like you've managed to ease into the years, regardless of good or bad. Congratulations on your win!

Edward Ebbs

Date: 11/11/2021 4:11:00 PM

Sweet Kiddo, Congrats! Ed

Karen Jones

Date: 11/11/2021 12:00:00 PM

LOVELY! Congrats on your win!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/11/2021 10:14:00 AM

What a beautiful tribute to a lifelong marriage. Inspiring and a model to follow! Congratulations on your win! Hugs!

Linda Craddick

Date: 11/11/2021 8:38:00 AM

I love this! How fortunate to still feel this kind of love through the years. Congratulations! Linda

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/11/2021 5:10:00 AM

Amazing, your love story, Jan:) congratulations on your win:)

Charles Messina

Date: 11/11/2021 2:09:00 AM

This is so beautifully written, Jan. I just adore it! Congratulations on your 1st place win! Hugs// Charlie

Lisa Ricci

Date: 11/5/2021 6:41:00 AM

Good Morning Jan - You have penned a healthy and beautiful love. May all know of your words and of such a love. Thank you for sharing. Have a great day.

Jenna Logan

Date: 11/4/2021 4:25:00 AM

Love, sweet love. It’s what the world needs now.

Bill Baker

Date: 11/1/2021 4:01:00 PM

WOW! The poem was short and sweet. I have a feeling that line fits you as well :-) Thanks for attaching the lovely song. I'll read more of your poems when I get a chance. Your post history is quite impressive. I'm new, Just 1 week today, so trying to get as many poems as I can out there :-). Following you now.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/1/2021 2:05:00 PM

So beautiful Jan! Both your romantic poem and Perry Como’s love song. Thank you for posting both. Have a great week my friend. Blessings xxoo

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/1/2021 11:05:00 AM

This is uplifting Jan!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/1/2021 10:51:00 AM

Finally an upper! Aloha!

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/1/2021 7:05:00 AM

Something beautiful 5 lines. You surely achieved that Jan. Wonderful poetry.

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/1/2021 4:00:00 AM

So sweet Jan! Happy Monday xdxoo

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/1/2021 3:58:00 AM

Love as it should be. Hugs.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/1/2021 2:28:00 AM

Wow Jan, this is amazing ad so romantic. If I am watching a movie reading a book or a poem I love happy endings that vow eternal love, in fact I am a real sucker for these type of declarations of love. Enjoyed reading this poem Jan good luck in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 10/31/2021 9:52:00 PM

Romance at its best...Delice

James Peranteau

Date: 10/31/2021 8:20:00 PM

that's all i need is more reminders how beautiful love iz...*sm...you have set off mine muse alarm dear poet! ty, sweet write..have a wonderful week...much love, james