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Beautiful Fall

Bountiful beauty all around Enveloped in nature’s painting of colors Air is cool in this bright season Under leaves falling in pieces of pleasure The pumpkins glow with smiling faces Inside warm apple cider waits a sip Friendly walks on shining paths Under trees, places wait another kiss Love spreads on the canvas of land Fall is the season that brings all this Always a joy to experience the new Let us watch and share the wonder Lasting a season, but forever in a lifetime Heidi Sands 9/10/18

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/14/2018 8:43:00 AM

You nailed it with the last line, Heidi:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/14/2018 8:46:00 AM

Thank you Jo :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/13/2018 11:51:00 PM

a pleasant walk with nature this one is, heidi... how vibrant is fall!..huggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/14/2018 3:23:00 AM

Thank you Nette :) I appreciate your visit and comment :)

Bette Bavington

Date: 9/13/2018 5:34:00 PM

This poem makes me feel the glow of seasons colors. Jack o lanterns with their craved faces. The smell of Apple cider. As we get ready for all the holidays. You did a wonderful poem of autumn.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/13/2018 8:29:00 PM

Thank you very much Bette :)

Lewis Raynes

Date: 9/12/2018 12:59:00 PM

A great visual acrostic Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/12/2018 1:39:00 PM

Thank you Lewis. I appreciate your comment :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/12/2018 4:31:00 AM

Luv it! I can feel the cooler breeze; see the beautiful colors, dotting the landscape; it's closing in here. Beautiful imagery.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/12/2018 5:25:00 AM

Thank you M.L :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/11/2018 1:04:00 PM

...fall, falling beautifully in this excellent acrostic, Heidi...love & fall...^WW^

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/11/2018 1:53:00 PM

Thank you WW :)

Silent One

Date: 9/11/2018 6:51:00 AM

Great acrostic, lovely imagery also... Fall, inspires so many poets..

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/11/2018 7:07:00 AM

Thank you Silent One. Nice to see you :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/11/2018 5:53:00 AM

Wow!! Such a colorful, lively, delicious write. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/11/2018 5:54:00 AM

Thank you Sara. Have a nice day :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 9/10/2018 10:49:00 PM

This is lovely, Heidi, and captures the very essence of this beautiful, though melancholy, time of year. Viv x

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/11/2018 5:53:00 AM

Thank you Viv . I am happy to hear that. :)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 9/10/2018 8:05:00 PM

This is beautiful Heidi, When I read many of your poems, I feel a softness about them. "Under leaves falling" reminds me of when I was under a pile of leaves as a child. Lovely

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/10/2018 8:07:00 PM

Thank you Sandra.! That is nice to hear. I too, remember being under a pile of leaves as a child :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/10/2018 3:09:00 PM

Lovely verse Heidi, autumn is a beautiful season, so colourful. Never used that form, the pumpkins glow, better put sweets on the shopping list lol. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/10/2018 3:15:00 PM

Thank you Tom. Yes, better not forget the sweets :) lol... I appreciate your comment.

Vincent Flannery

Date: 9/10/2018 12:57:00 PM

Such a heartwarming piece Heidi that flows along like a cool crisp autumn day. A wonderful time of the year revealed vividly with the sense of familiarity. Great peice Heidi, I love the pumpkins smiling away. God Bless.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/10/2018 1:23:00 PM

Thank you very much Vincent :)