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Beautiful Fall

Birds call out in the Evening indicating the end of A carmine Autumn day, Umber leaves dazzle brightly in The sun's golden rays Igniting the sky red with its Fiery carnelian shades, Under which we rejoice Looking at the ruby sky. Flames sizzle in the fireplace, A reminder of what's outside, Lovely colours floating down Light up the chromatic naturescape. 09/10/18

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Date: 10/1/2018 10:30:00 AM
Wonderful use of imagery is a mighty fine and pretty acrostic - drew me in and I loved the use of colors. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 9/23/2018 10:21:00 AM
Very visual, nice use of colors and descriptive wording.
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Date: 9/16/2018 2:05:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Jo. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 9/14/2018 10:33:00 PM
An Excellent Acrostic Jo! Congratulations on your win! I love this entry, succinct and beautiful! : )
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Date: 9/14/2018 8:12:00 PM
A most enjoyed read, Jo. I, like John, love all the colors you implemented in this beautiful poem. Congratulations on your placement:)
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Date: 9/14/2018 2:18:00 PM
Loved your use of different names for color, carmine, umber, carnelian, very refreshing read, congrats on a fine placement Jo!
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Date: 9/10/2018 7:19:00 AM
Very nice Jo! :)
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