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Beautiful Apparition

When I first saw you, you were standing beautifully in a river of moonlight. You had appeared as if from out of nowhere. Lonesome you seemed in the black of night. But you were different, dressed all in white and I was someone longing for a view - the view of someone who’d be there for me if it chanced to be I needed you, I looked at you as if you were an angel - an otherworldly creature you seemed to be. You glanced at me with eyes that brightly shone. Were you an angel sent to rescue me? Could you dispel the gloom I often felt? Could you lift me higher from my mortal plane? How I longed for someone like an angel to take away from me what was mundane. I looked again and you had disappeared. Had it all been my imagination? Was I going crazy? Had you been only a lovely hallucination? Still I search for you and some redemption when I stand beneath a moon that’s glowing. And how I dream you’ll come again to me with your angelic face so brightly showing! April 5, 2023 for Sotto Poet's Free Submission Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/8/2023 10:01:00 PM
Sometimes we are deluded into seeing mysterious things ! Probably what you saw must have been an angel who had come to delight you and give you hope in your weary hours. Congratulations dear Andrea on your win.
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Date: 4/8/2023 8:30:00 AM
I'm sure He will Andrea, He already knows you have a kind heart and a wonderful soul. Happy Easter my friend from across the pond to you and ALL your family. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Congratulations on a great win.
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Date: 4/8/2023 2:14:00 AM
- A beautiful sight... - Congratulations on your win, Andrea - hugs
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Date: 4/6/2023 12:38:00 AM
Great fancy, Andrea, the moon evokes magic:)
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Date: 4/5/2023 4:14:00 PM
A beautiful apparition, Andrea! I wouldn't be surprised if it were true because I believe spirits, angels can appear to comfort us when they hear our need. Best of luck! Oh, and I did write a poem for Constances's contest, and did not do the other things I need to do. :)
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Date: 4/5/2023 9:55:00 AM
But you were different, dressed all in white - perhaps like a knight in shining armor…a fantasy? Great write, Andrea!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/5/2023 12:27:00 PM
yes, like a fantasy
Date: 4/5/2023 8:03:00 AM
Delightful recall, Andrea: Still I search for you and some redemption when I stand beneath a moon that’s glowing---such pleasant memories we never forget.
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Date: 4/5/2023 7:08:00 AM
Oh wow! A sublime write, Andrea, fairy tale like ~ enjoyed
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/5/2023 10:41:00 AM
yes, I wanted it to be dreamy like a fairy tale. thanks

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