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Beautiful Sunrise - the Whitney Style

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~Beautiful Sunrise~ ( Double Whitney ) Sunrise shines Appears again Spreads around Cover mountains Beach, above Clouds softly pass A band of geese fly high The air's cool And the sun's warm Delightful Wonderful time Warms my heart The songbirds sings His love shines upon my face. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012
August.10.2016 ~Author's Notes: The "Whitney" is a syllabic poetry form or style, that was created by Betty Ann Whitney.The "Whitney" is also known as an American Asian Poem.

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Date: 8/10/2016 7:52:00 PM
Very uplifting poem, Dorian :)
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 8/12/2016 10:38:00 AM
Thank you ever so kindly, Laura , for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

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