Beautiful Night - the Rhyming Sands Style

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~Beautiful Night~ (Rhyming Sands) The night is so warm and bright So beautifully right Outside theres full moon A night of June That is twice As nice Enchanting Bewitching Full of romance Great time to dance Wonderful night to sit Watching the full moons so neat. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 March.17.2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain ~Author's Notes: The "Rhyming Sands" is a poetry style that was created by Ann Marie Mazzarella, on November.06.2009.

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/17/2017 5:44:00 PM

Hello Dorian. This entry is beautiful. Always do you show and write with beauty. Wonderful work with the imagery and thought of enchanting and bewitching. Well done entirely.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/20/2017 12:21:00 AM

"Hi Lisa! Thank you ever so kindly for stopping by again and commenting so beautifully on my poem. Deeply appreciated so much your support and all:)) You're always so sweet and kind to me Lisa.So happy you think so and that you liked this poem of mine and its very romantic imagery also.Thanks again n' again for the 7 and all Lisa.Wishing you a very lovely week! in His light God bless you always!:) D.