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Beautiful

The sea and the moon
They touch with brief abandon
The light of passion


For Raul's contest..Reflections

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Paul Holmes

Date: 7/2/2010 10:17:00 AM

Written as a true romantic. Good.

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/15/2009 11:46:00 AM

So incredibly beautiful!!! Congrats on your well deserved win indeed! Thank you dear, sweet Barbara for your thoughtful congrats, and for not forgetting me. So warmly appreciated. Happiest of holidays to you! love & hugs, shar xoxoxo

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/7/2009 5:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win in Raul's "Reflections" Contest, Barbara! Peace and love, Audrey

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/3/2009 5:53:00 PM

Dear Barbara,Barbeeg,Congratulations On Your well Deserved win in Raul's Contest I'll be the Sea if YOU will be the Moon "The Light of Passion" LOVE ALWAYS...HG

Elaine George

Date: 12/3/2009 2:17:00 PM

Wow! What a wonderful notion, Barbara. Beautiful Haiku. Congratulations on your win. Love, Lainie

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/2/2009 7:47:00 PM

Such a romantic haiku yet beautifully bittersweet in its own way--very nicely done! Congrats on your win and thank you for the greetings on my haiku :) enjoy your day!

Elaine George

Date: 12/2/2009 5:31:00 PM

Wow! what a beautiful Haiku, Congratulations on your win. Love,l Lainie

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/2/2009 3:46:00 PM

cogratulations Barbara and thank you for your encouragement. Robert

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/2/2009 1:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Reflections" Contest! Peace and love, Audrey

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/2/2009 1:50:00 PM

I love the personification in this haiku. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest, and thank you so much for your kind comments! ~Juliane

Date: 12/2/2009 9:59:00 AM

Interesting perspective on the photo. Nice use of personification. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/2/2009 8:06:00 AM

nicely penned poem, congrats in the contest!!

Brian Strand

Date: 12/2/2009 7:55:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Barbara.Rgds Brian

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/2/2009 7:50:00 AM

Congratulations, Barbara on this wonderful look at Raul's contest! A beautiful, romantic haiku! ~ Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/2/2009 5:16:00 AM

Congrats, BG, on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. well deserved win.. blessings... luv.. happy holidays... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/2/2009 3:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Barbara. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/2/2009 2:49:00 AM

BG, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/29/2009 12:23:00 PM

Barbara, This is a beautiful Haiku. And the moon is the light of passion as you have said. Smiles, Dane Ann

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 11/28/2009 8:53:00 PM

Dear Barbara, Another WINNER in the making Remember I said it First YOU saw deep into the Picture GOOD LUCK LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG

James Fraser

Date: 11/28/2009 2:35:00 PM

The title says it all Barbara >> James

Daver Austin

Date: 11/27/2009 7:38:00 AM

This ripples nicely in the imagination. Love, daver

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/27/2009 5:22:00 AM

Wonderful words, BG and good luck in Raul's contest.. I have also entered my Revelation poem to feed my competitive spirit .. exciting and fun to share also... blessings ... luv... happy Monday... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Marty Owens

Date: 11/25/2009 8:18:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Barbara...Enjoyed...Good luck in the contest...Marty