Beautiful------- Blood-------- Stain:::::::::::::::::::::::::

Living amongst Hell's battles with little to gain aftermath brings stinging rain as beauty dwells in the blood of the stain

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Shaz Cheesman

Date: 5/25/2012 5:25:00 AM

Hey JS.....i gotta love the way your mind works your words....u have a great poetry flavour - Shaz

David Williams

Date: 2/14/2012 3:22:00 PM

Hey Joey, whoa this is almost as weird as mine,,glad you liked it, if it's weird i'm there..David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2012 10:14:00 PM

ME LIKES this one, Joey. It really makes you stop and think on those last few lines! I REALLY appreciate what you said about your support if I ever write a book. Yeah, one day one day. as I keep sayin'. Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/13/2012 5:06:00 PM

Interesting work that you have penned..Yes, some of life can be hell's battles especially those fought in the mind with one wanting to do what is right but it being easier to do what is wrong according the world's standards...Your kind review of my work was uplifting..Sara

Broken Butterfly

Date: 2/13/2012 3:41:00 PM

I love how you play with words and form. Great writing. I want to thank you for all you super comments on my writing, thanks for taking a trip back in time. I do not comment much, I just have so little time, I have to make a choice write or comment, I think you understand. Hopefully one day that will change,

Jeffry Cohan

Date: 2/13/2012 9:07:00 AM

take these few words reduce them to their lowest common demonminator and you have an insightful and moving poem..some of you need to learn from this poem and all of mine PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/13/2012 1:07:00 AM

Simple wording and easy to read. It delivers good descriptiveness.

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/12/2012 10:27:00 PM

In my Magic Number poem, it is essentially just the number of kisses that someone would receive during their first date. So simple, I can see how you might want to read into the poem for more complexity but there isn't anything more there, not intentional anyway! I hope you enjoyed the poem though!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/12/2012 9:43:00 PM

Mr Roboto... a battle on can't fight without a stain... nice rhyme.. one can only have one night and shed all the beauty blood holds... enjoyed,, your true ways,, and view from here... have a nice one..pd

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/12/2012 9:27:00 PM

Wow, now that is a spectacular poem! I thoroughly enjoyed this write you have written tonight Joey! This is the type of descriptions that I like for my poetry, very nicely done with the rhymes! Great Work!!