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Beating Hearts

the beating of our hearts and the melting of our lust- no words spoken . . . __________________________ December 22, 2019 Poetry/Monoku/beating hearts Copyright Protected, ID 19- 1210-827-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted into the contest, One Liner sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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Md Johnson

Date: 12/28/2019 7:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your win.

Constance La France
Date: 12/29/2019 12:02:00 PM

MD, thanks for the congratulations !

Joan C. Fingon

Date: 12/28/2019 4:20:00 PM

nicely done and says so much!

Constance La France
Date: 12/29/2019 12:02:00 PM

Joan, thanks so much for the compliment !

Charles Messina

Date: 12/27/2019 4:35:00 PM

Great one-liner, DH. Congrats on your placement.

Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2019 9:08:00 PM

Charlie thanks for the compliment and the congrats !

Eve Roper

Date: 12/27/2019 2:20:00 PM

Dear Heart, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2019 9:09:00 PM

Eve, thanks for the congratulations !

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/27/2019 2:07:00 PM

Congrats on your podium finish with this sensuous monoku, Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2019 9:09:00 PM

Line, thanks for the congrats and the compliment !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2019 1:29:00 PM

Wow. Amazing, dear heart. Congrats to you

Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2019 9:10:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for the compliment and congrats !

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/27/2019 12:52:00 PM

Best description of no spoken words ...

Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2019 9:10:00 PM

Kai, thanks so much for the comment and visit !

Brian Strand

Date: 12/27/2019 10:25:00 AM

A senryu to savour Constance

Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2019 9:11:00 PM

Brian, thank you so much !

Silent One

Date: 12/27/2019 10:00:00 AM

What a moment... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2019 10:09:00 AM

Silent, thanks for another great contest and for my placement, honored

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/27/2019 5:34:00 AM

Absolutely stunning.

Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2019 8:36:00 AM

Kai, thanks for the compliment, appreciate !

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/22/2019 4:54:00 PM

Wow! BW, This is such a good piece for the contest. I've never so much passion in a few words. I'm sure I will see you in the winners circle. Great job. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

Constance La France
Date: 12/23/2019 6:01:00 PM

Alexis, thanks for visiting my poem and for the vote of confidence, I hope Silent likes it too !