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Beating Hearts

Beating Hearts*Hearts Beating beating drums with emotions seeping*seeping emotions with drums beating fleeting vibrations thru silent keeping*keeping silent thru vibrations fleeting thunder echoing with voices standing*standing voices with echoing thunder under fading skies forever expanding*expanding forever skies fading under hearts tangled within love strumming*strumming love within tangled hearts parts rebreathing thru space humming*humming space thru rebreathing parts whispers reverberating with ambiance*ambiance with reverberating whispers shivers orgiastic thru desiring dalliance*dalliance desiring thru orgiastic shivers chambers in chiming amidst throbbing*throbbing amidst chiming in chambers layers tearing with turbulence sobbing*sobbing turbulence with tearing layers pulsating hearts with endless motions*motions endless with hearts pulsating mating bodies engaging upon devotions*devotions upon engaging bodies mating sharing beats of symbolic love booming*booming love symbolic of beats sharing baring breasts with eruptions fuming*fuming eruptions with breasts baring fluttering hearts exploding into ecstasy*ecstasy into exploding hearts fluttering sputtering ripples of spawning empathy*empathy spawning of ripples sputtering This poem is what I call a BDHB...( backward double helix butterfly ) a first in the 'Mirrors of Infinity' collection. ...Ok, just messing with you...there is no such collection...only having fun with words...what! you thought there was such a thing? Sept.07.2018 Write me an Emotion-act Poetry Sponsored by: Brenda Chiri Placed 1'st...[1'st of 2]

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Date: 10/9/2018 1:30:00 PM
Once again, your thoughts leave me breathless. Both forwards as well as backwards. :) Congratulations my Warrior with Wings. Love and Words. ~ Brandy
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Date: 10/8/2018 11:09:00 PM
Such a creative mind...I am full of admiration. .congratulations on churning out this unique piece
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Date: 10/8/2018 2:06:00 PM
This is AWESOME! The mirroring works well... almost like another heart mirroring the beat. We will all wait expectantly for this "Mirrors of Infinity" anthology that is now required of you.
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Date: 10/8/2018 1:22:00 PM
What a mind you have WW, and rightly rewarded, congrats on a great write and win!
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Date: 9/11/2018 4:37:00 PM
Nice one WW, great expressions and imagery making it well penned and looks as if something that could be sung. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 9/9/2018 8:54:00 PM
Nice imagery of hearts beating as one. That was so fun what you did at the end trying to fool us!!
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Date: 9/8/2018 8:51:00 PM
:) "Soft and tender are heartbeats, before beats become quickly and more- more and quickly become beats, before heartbeats are tender and soft" Yes, it is fun lingering with words. I hope you like what I created, forwards and backwards. Your thoughts are mesmerizing. ~ Brandy
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Date: 9/8/2018 11:12:00 PM
Excellent my dear friend...now I have competition...bring it on girl...where's my pen?...love & poetry...^WW^
Date: 9/8/2018 11:36:00 AM
Another amazing poem WW! and what?? there is no mirrors of infinity collection? lol Well, maybe there should be! Keep up the beautiful writing. :)
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Date: 9/8/2018 11:14:00 PM
Thank you, my beautiful friend...If I do I shall dedicate to you...love & light...^WW^
Date: 9/8/2018 10:40:00 AM
Weave your magic my friend...or just be...All is wonderful...when heart smiles...Nice write...All the best...
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Date: 9/8/2018 11:15:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend...L&L...^WW^
Date: 9/8/2018 9:40:00 AM
Splendid talent on display..don't know how you manage to do this, WW..a sure win for you.
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Date: 9/8/2018 11:17:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay... it's not that hard...a bit challenging...but you can do...if you like this type of poetry...L&L...^WW^

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