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Beacon of Hope - Lind30 Form

O hope, you shine forth your light Like a beacon glowing bright In the dark tunnel of night; How will we, without thee, be set free? 01.26.2022 (7.7.7.9 syllables) (aaab rhyme scheme) For Line Gauthier's "Bite Size Poem No. 39" contest

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/10/2022 9:19:00 PM

Lovely ~

Meghan Hutchings

Date: 3/17/2022 11:20:00 AM

Congratulations, Jo! Your poem is beautiful and inspiring! It makes me feel hopeful when I read it! Excellent job! Much love...Meghan

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/17/2022 8:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Love this one. Have a blessed day.........

Faye Gibson

Date: 3/16/2022 12:52:00 PM

Lovely; where would we be without hope. Congratulations.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/15/2022 8:49:00 PM

Beautiful writing on the theme of light. Congratulations!

Valsa George

Date: 3/15/2022 7:00:00 PM

Wonderful ! Light caught in the best way ! Congratulations on your most deserving win Jo!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/23/2022 4:58:00 PM

Just beautiful Jo. Hope and faith keep us headed for the light out of the darkness. So true. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo

Hilo Poet

Date: 2/6/2022 11:40:00 AM

Succinctly well-said, Jo. I was unclear of what was requested from us, ergo, I did the entire ensemble as a singular tale. Having read a few others, so far I stand alone. Let's say that in my case, the fat lady had sung with clarity whilst I was on a cigarette break, and tho' I don't smoke, I'm just running out of excuses, c'est la vie my friend, Aloha, aka William~moving forward in life.