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Not a new poem, republished as I deleted it in error

Children frolic in soft, warm sand. Upon which, long ago, a band of brothers gave their lives to free a country held in tyranny; Omaha, Utah, each, as planned. Gold, Juno, Sword, a bloody land. Lives stolen far from their homeland. Where once blood stained the sand and sea, children frolic. What impulse makes a person stand, give everything; such pain withstand? Raw sacrifice, so you and we, new generations can now see beaches; where families love; and children frolic.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 8/9/2022 9:46:00 PM
Dear Terry, your beautiful poem of these particular beaches shine in striking contests of war and peace, life and death, love and hate, delightful and horrible, happy and sad, past and present.. the free world should forever be grateful for the ultimate sacrifices made there. Your skilled poignant pen reveals layers of emotion in a rondeau frame that punctuates painful imagery with the carefree image of children’s play and laughter, like a smile through a torrent of tears. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/13/2022 12:33:00 AM
Susan, thank you so very much for your extremely kind and generous comments
Date: 8/3/2022 12:31:00 PM
So glad you brought this one back, Terry. It's a fine, fine piece of writing. The contrast is startling between the war scenes and children playing. Good stuff!
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/6/2022 1:28:00 AM
Thanks, Milton; I took the opportunity to change two words while it was down; it made all the difference.
Date: 8/3/2022 8:08:00 AM
Cheers to the brave! May we uphold their memories with gratitude not angst! God bless!
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/6/2022 1:28:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Kim

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