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Beach Footles

sun warm sea calm men come waves hum sky blue in view sky’s dome clouds roam birds fly sky high time flees light gleams on shore waves roar rise high touch sky wild gales tear sails tides roar beat shore ships sail swims whale fish leap crabs creep day shrinks light winks night falls home calls men go in tow beach sleeps sea weeps

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/16/2025 3:09:00 PM

Wonderful that you could do all of these which are not that easy to write. Way to go. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/12/2025 7:50:00 PM

Oh wow, you gave us nice little snap shots of the sea and beach, I love it, especially on this cold winter day when we are getting close to 20 cm of snow here, God bless :)

Susan Lawrence

Date: 2/12/2025 7:25:00 AM

Valsa, This is so charming ! You brought me to a day at the beach with sights, sounds and energy including salt in the air and briny bites ! I used to live on a boat on the water and it was such a great experience. “Wild gales tear sails “ “ birds fly sky high” I saw these things and loved the power of the weather . Big hugs . I have missed your poems . Susan :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/11/2025 9:01:00 AM

"beach sleeps sea weeps" -- love that sensitive image. Been so long since I have been on a beach -- now I am longing. Wonderful write.

Jay Narain

Date: 2/10/2025 11:03:00 AM

Rhythmic sea footies. Well penned.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/10/2025 7:02:00 AM

Dear Valsa, this is absolutely delightful, each footle a tiny wave, rolling in rhythm, painting a whole seascape in just a few beats. I really found it to be playful yet introspective, carrying the ebb and flow of nature’s song. A joy to read! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/10/2025 3:51:00 AM

Dear Valsa, your footle is great. I love those rhymes. If for a contest, best of luck.

Ink Empress

Date: 2/10/2025 3:26:00 AM

I love the last one so much dear sweet valsa and how youve come up with such creative and unique rhymes for your footle is truly impressive! I tried footle once and it was fun and addictive, if this is for brians contest, best wishes. Pleasure reading your work today. Sending you light always.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/10/2025 2:36:00 AM

- Great done, Valsa :) - hugs

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 2/10/2025 2:04:00 AM

Very creative Valsa. Nice use of the footies

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/10/2025 1:59:00 AM

You've certainly caught the footle bug Valsa, I'm sure I commented earlier. Tom