Beach Ball Recalls

For almost a decade now, 
a beach ball has been firmly wedged 
between skeletal roof cross beams
at my local swimming pool 

No doubt some kid kicked too hard, 
and it accidentally got wedged tight

But come on! 
ten years later and still it’s stuck up there,
albeit slightly deflated 

Every week when I’m doing backstroke lengths,
I look up and wonder, if actual information 
is still contained within the ball, 
Perhaps a stale essence of 
chewing gum flavoured breath lingers inside 

But what if that person is now deceased,
could part of the dead person’s breath
be trapped inside the ball,
Why do certain observations evoke 
such thoughts within my mind

Maybe I’m overthinking again!
just like that time I purposely spat into an open sewer, 
and wondered if the spit 
would live on down there with the rats forever 

Bits of me are scattered throughout time 
Broken nails 
grazed skin 
blood,
Information is never really lost, 
it’s completely indestructible 

Past moments can flood forth almost at a whim 
recombobulated back into existence
by sights, sounds, scents, 
all mosaicked together by particles of abstract information

Damn that beach ball
with its unknown, 
yet knowable contents
Why won’t those lazy pool attendants take it down, 
do they believe it’s haunted,
or am I the only one who thinks about its breath
as I’m doing lengths

Still not all moments are bad,
some are really great, 
until others permeate into my psyche, 
creating images I hate

Threading time together 
treading water forever 

When I spat into that open sewer, 
did it make the rats less or more impure

Probably the latter
of that, I’m pretty sure!

Anyway the beach ball 
was probably inflated by a pump!

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Date: 8/14/2023 4:34:00 PM
But what if that person is now deceased, could part of the dead person’s breath be trapped inside the ball…wow, that is something! … Bits of me are scattered throughout time. And LOL as I get to the last line! Congratulations on second place. It’s way up there…will somebody ponder…
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David Kavanagh
Date: 8/15/2023 12:55:00 AM
I was always going to go for the pump in the end lol, seemed more fitting Kim, but yeah it certainly got me thinking, about the bits of us we leave behind, they still exist in one form or another, but I’ll save that one for another day, thanks so much for stopping by, cheers David
Date: 8/2/2023 11:32:00 AM
If hamburgers we ate at ten years old stay in our system, I'm sure your spit will festure just fine! Lol. Serious and delible, Bol, David.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/14/2023 9:04:00 AM
Congratulations David! Di11y really gets you.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 8/4/2023 2:46:00 AM
Power poets? Probably more like unorthodox and abstract, no power musings at the moment, hopefully will return soon!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/2/2023 4:17:00 PM
You've definitely "transformed to stand out". Any form is acceptable. (Though please submit as free verse), the perfection of the form will not be judged, just the skill of crafting an enjoyable poem. This challenge I shall not tackle it's too difficult for me. You [power] wordsmiths are doing just fine, 19 out of 35 so far, gonna go and check some more out! Good luck
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David Kavanagh
Date: 8/2/2023 11:54:00 AM
I’m sure it’s still down there contaminating the rats Anaya, a little insight into the high regard in which I hold myself at times, thanks so much for stopping by, cheers David
Date: 7/28/2023 12:19:00 PM
David, after all those great off the wall thoughts you think it was blown up with a pump. And compared to the filth in a sewer I would think your spit purified it a titch! My minds thinks of so many trivial things that my son often asks, “What makes you think of such details?” I dunno. They just come unbidden. Your entry took Dilly’s words to a higher level of wondering.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/28/2023 1:39:00 PM
Woo-Hoo! Sounds great lol!
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/28/2023 1:26:00 PM
That much, Huh ? Poor man. I’ll send you a care package of New Orlean’s goodies. You know I’m a rhymer at heart but sometimes ya just gotta put it out there as it comes to mind.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/28/2023 1:15:00 PM
Sounds good to me Lin, but I think rhyme keeps my train of thought focused, hey I never do anything on the cheap, PS pays me good money for my poems, nearly as much as the striking Hollywood writers are getting at the moment!
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/28/2023 12:58:00 PM
“Free” means you are free to write wherever your thoughts wander and whatever they wonder. It’s cheaper than time spent rhyming. lol. You’re welcome, David.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/28/2023 12:38:00 PM
Free verse is out of my comfort zone Lin, so all sorts of, off the wall thoughts were rampaging through my mind, but I suppose that’s pretty normal for me, I’m delighted you think I took Dilly’s words to a higher level of wondering, thank you for the kind critique, cheers David
Date: 7/28/2023 12:10:00 PM
For Dilly Dally’s Teach me a lesson poetry contest
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