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Be To Become

A gentle breeze is what we have become Free from fetters and idle thought chatter Heart feeling the bliss hum constantly drum Save savouring love, nothing does matter As God draws nearer, His plan is clearer Why then would we need a rear view mirror Love’s caress sublime enlivens our heart Presence feels therein bliss ignition start

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/5/2023 1:36:00 PM

your words and rhyme scheme flowed beautifully with a blissful message. When we understand, we truly don't need that rearview mirror. I loved that phrase and enjoyed the read. Sara

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/5/2023 4:54:00 PM

Thank you, Sara. Yes, as Eckhart Tolle and many others say, ‘live in the here and now’

Ink Empress

Date: 11/5/2023 1:52:00 AM

You are truly a natural with rhymes! I love the way your rispetto flows with such deeply moving lines! I did a rispetto too , for the first time, was fun learning. “ Why then would we need a rear view mirror” this line stood out the most for me! How profound! Love it!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/5/2023 2:25:00 AM

Ah ~ your comment drew my attention to a flaw, repeating the word ‘hum’ twice, which I hastened to rectify! This is what happens if we don’t proof read the poems before submitting :( so delighted you enjoyed nevertheless, IE