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Be Kind To My Heart

As I look at you, you make my head spin, from the time we met my senses you stole Your beautiful smooth alabaster skin reflects in the gentleness of your soul and when you speak you stir feelings within that leads my heart to emotional sin.
01-29-17

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Date: 11/15/2017 10:01:00 PM
"Emotional sin" - wow! Don't think I've heard that before. Inner emotions often make some of the best poems, when worded just so. This one was worded, in short, just enchantingly. :) Always, Laura
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James Inman
Date: 11/16/2017 6:12:00 AM
The big bad wolf syndrome, the desire within to lead astray the naive young maiden. (Alas, young maidens are never so naive as they seem.)
Date: 2/3/2017 1:39:00 PM
Lovely romantic poem, James. Congratulations on your win. // Barry
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James Inman
Date: 2/3/2017 2:04:00 PM
Thank you Barry.
Date: 2/3/2017 12:56:00 PM
I like the easy lilting stoke on the first few lines but the ending comes as a nice twist.. :) clever write, James.. :) smiles, Olive ELoisa :)
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James Inman
Date: 2/3/2017 2:05:00 PM
Nice of you to visit Olive. Thank you for the great comment.
Date: 2/3/2017 8:33:00 AM
A 7 for your great WINNING poem, James. Janice
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James Inman
Date: 2/3/2017 8:47:00 AM
Thanks for the kindness Janice.
Date: 2/2/2017 6:52:00 PM
GREAT poem, Ralph. Long time no see!! Congrats for this win.
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James Inman
Date: 2/2/2017 7:02:00 PM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 2/2/2017 2:47:00 PM
Very romantic, rich imagery!!! Congrats James, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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James Inman
Date: 2/2/2017 7:02:00 PM
Thanks Teddy
Date: 2/1/2017 3:56:00 PM
Wow James, this is powerful and sweet! Congratulations on your win!
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James Inman
Date: 2/2/2017 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Paulette.
Date: 2/1/2017 12:49:00 PM
Wow!! Nicely done!! And Congratulations!! James! Big Hugggs!! Deb
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James Inman
Date: 2/1/2017 1:17:00 PM
Thank you Deb.
Date: 1/29/2017 11:12:00 AM
be careful of that sinning heart james! I do love that last line:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 1/29/2017 2:42:00 PM
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