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Be Forever Mine

Come to me, come to me now I will let you know how Love for you my heart can pour I like you, I seek you, I adore you The way I didn’t before Whenever your beauty I see Its charm allures me Like a fly I rush attracted into the fire I like you, I seek you, I adore you With deep desire When you’re with me my loneliness becomes A thing of the past Let me tell you Till the end of time my love will last I want you to be forever mine Never let me pine If you’re far I yearn for you more I like you, I seek you, I adore you The way I didn’t before ______________ Inspired by lyric of Elvis Presley Song "I want you, I need you, I love you" May 13. 2023 Contest : Elvis Presley Inspiration Sponsored by : Robert James Liguori

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Date: 5/13/2023 12:42:00 PM
Subimal, you did a wonderful poem inspired by I Want You, I Need You, I Love You and congratulations on your win in the contest. !
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/16/2023 11:42:00 PM
Thank you, Constance for your wonderful comment. Yours was also wonderful that I enjoyed.
Date: 5/13/2023 2:15:00 AM
It's always good to read something based on or inspired by an artist/singer/musician who is admired. So thank you, Subimal.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/16/2023 11:41:00 PM
Thank you, Andrew for your thoughtful observation.

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