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Break free, a cloudless seam silent screams, repeat defeat deafened to a darkened end pulses penetrate, relentless night hits harder and harder but alone I shan't be, alone I can't be, still

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Date: 12/15/2017 5:25:00 AM
Be/Still... intriguing little poem...All the best Tim
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Date: 12/15/2017 1:56:00 AM
very deep and dark Tim. It must be difficult to break free from the pain of the past and move on - love the ending and never give up hope:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/14/2017 11:03:00 PM
I can feel each line here, I doubt I will ever make to the last line, :( great poem.
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Date: 12/14/2017 9:32:00 PM
I like this. x
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