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Bawdy Bawdy

She watched, as he rose to attention
Her desire was too hot to mention
From pink lips passion flows
She reaches for his hose
A bit short, he needs an extension 


Not a limerick guy, I hope I got it right.

For Roy Jergen's Bawdy, Bawdy, bawdy miss Clawdy contest.

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

June 17, 2014 at 9:12 AM

Interesting one. Congrats on your win.

Poet Destroyer A

June 15, 2014 at 7:19 PM

thank you for the comment on my comment.. Linda

Paul Callus

June 14, 2014 at 9:01 AM

I'll give you a 7 rating for this one Richard! Very witty:) I notice you're on the winners' list....congrats! // paul [pls inversion of to and too]

Richard Lamoureux

June 14, 2014 at 9:14 AM

Thanks Paul.

Poet Destroyer A

June 14, 2014 at 12:03 AM

Richard, :)Congratulations on your win. "Linda"

Richard Lamoureux

June 14, 2014 at 8:53 AM

Thanks Linda.

Sara Kendrick

June 9, 2014 at 6:05 PM

I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it exceptional…Sara

Richard Lamoureux

June 14, 2014 at 8:53 AM

You are kind Sara.

Elaine George

June 9, 2014 at 1:09 PM

Toooooooooooooo funny! Many congrat's on your win, Richard. Elaine

Richard Lamoureux

June 14, 2014 at 8:54 AM

Thanks Elaine.

Shadow Hamilton

June 9, 2014 at 7:29 AM

lol very good Rick congrats on win hugs

Richard Lamoureux

June 9, 2014 at 10:47 AM

Thanks Shadow.

Skat A

June 8, 2014 at 7:31 AM

Richard, Congrats, on your "Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy" win........ Enjoyable Limerick :) LOVE ~SKAT~

Richard Lamoureux

June 9, 2014 at 10:47 AM

Thanks SKAT.

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 7, 2014 at 9:49 PM

Congratulations on your fine win with this well humored limerick, RichARD

Richard Lamoureux

June 9, 2014 at 10:49 AM

Thanks Dr. Ram.

Andrea Dietrich

June 7, 2014 at 9:45 PM

One of THE funniest ones on the winner list. Congrats my friend.

Richard Lamoureux

June 9, 2014 at 10:48 AM

I'm glad you like it.

Debbie Guzzi

June 7, 2014 at 8:06 PM

[from pink lips passion flowed/ as she sword swallowed his hose/seemed to her he'd need more attention] Congrad's on you BIG win!!! ;) Light & Love

Richard Lamoureux

June 9, 2014 at 10:53 AM

I noticed on a few of the entries you have rewritten the lines. May I ask why???

Casarah Nance

June 7, 2014 at 7:38 PM

Oh my goodness! what a winner, I laughed out loud! Very great! good job

Richard Lamoureux

June 9, 2014 at 10:50 AM

Thanks Casarah.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

May 29, 2014 at 1:30 PM

Hahahaha hilarious Richard..:) witty :too!!! GBU

Richard Lamoureux

June 9, 2014 at 10:51 AM

Thanks Olive.

Andrea Dietrich

May 23, 2014 at 8:17 PM

Yes, YOU GOT IT RIGHT> one of the best I have seen for humor!!! A little suggestion in line two: Her desire was too hot to mention (I added a word for syllable count and changed spelling on the "to" words). Check it on a syllable counter, but I am pretty sure "desire" is only two syllables, so that is why you needed an extra one.

Richard Lamoureux

May 26, 2014 at 7:36 AM

Thanks, that is a good suggestion.

Carolyn Devonshire

May 23, 2014 at 4:29 PM

Dear Richard, you definitely got the humor in your poem! I'm still laughing. I am a limerick person, but not a meter maid. If this were my contest, you'd place high! You'll surely get a laugh from Roy! Wishing you success, Carolyn

Richard Lamoureux

May 23, 2014 at 4:47 PM

Thanks Carolyn I have only written a couple of Limericks so this was a bit of a challenge for me. I love your Meter Maid comment, you have made me smile.

Shadow Hamilton

May 22, 2014 at 4:17 AM

very funny and a bit naughty lol Rick good luck in contest hugs

Richard Lamoureux

May 22, 2014 at 8:59 AM

Thanks Shadow.

Eileen Manassian

May 21, 2014 at 8:12 AM

Oh, My oh MY! Poor guy! ;) Funny limerick, Richard. Be sure to change to to too! I don't know if Roy is strict on syllable count, but the first 2 and the last line are to be 7 syllables and the 3rd and 4th, five syllables each. The rhyming scheme is perfect! ;) Naughty, naughty you! ;)

Richard Lamoureux

May 21, 2014 at 8:33 AM

His rules said 99669. I am not that familiar with the form, he described this as a classic form.