Bawdy Bawdy

She watched, as he rose to attention
Her desire was too hot to mention
From pink lips passion flows
She reaches for his hose
A bit short, he needs an extension 


Not a limerick guy, I hope I got it right.

For Roy Jergen's Bawdy, Bawdy, bawdy miss Clawdy contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 6/17/2014 9:12:00 AM
Interesting one. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/15/2014 7:19:00 PM
thank you for the comment on my comment.. Linda
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Date: 6/14/2014 9:01:00 AM
I'll give you a 7 rating for this one Richard! Very witty:) I notice you're on the winners' list....congrats! // paul [pls inversion of to and too]
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/14/2014 9:14:00 AM
Thanks Paul.
Date: 6/14/2014 12:03:00 AM
Richard, :)Congratulations on your win. "Linda"
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/14/2014 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Linda.
Date: 6/9/2014 6:05:00 PM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it exceptional…Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/14/2014 8:53:00 AM
You are kind Sara.
Date: 6/9/2014 1:09:00 PM
Toooooooooooooo funny! Many congrat's on your win, Richard. Elaine
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/14/2014 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Elaine.
Date: 6/9/2014 7:29:00 AM
lol very good Rick congrats on win hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2014 10:47:00 AM
Thanks Shadow.
Date: 6/8/2014 7:31:00 AM
Richard, Congrats, on your "Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy" win........ Enjoyable Limerick :) LOVE ~SKAT~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2014 10:47:00 AM
Thanks SKAT.
Date: 6/7/2014 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win with this well humored limerick, RichARD
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2014 10:49:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram.
Date: 6/7/2014 9:45:00 PM
One of THE funniest ones on the winner list. Congrats my friend.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2014 10:48:00 AM
I'm glad you like it.
Date: 6/7/2014 8:06:00 PM
[from pink lips passion flowed/ as she sword swallowed his hose/seemed to her he'd need more attention] Congrad's on you BIG win!!! ;) Light & Love
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2014 10:53:00 AM
I noticed on a few of the entries you have rewritten the lines. May I ask why???
Date: 6/7/2014 7:38:00 PM
Oh my goodness! what a winner, I laughed out loud! Very great! good job
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2014 10:50:00 AM
Thanks Casarah.
Date: 5/29/2014 1:30:00 PM
Hahahaha hilarious Richard..:) witty :too!!! GBU
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2014 10:51:00 AM
Thanks Olive.
Date: 5/23/2014 8:17:00 PM
Yes, YOU GOT IT RIGHT> one of the best I have seen for humor!!! A little suggestion in line two: Her desire was too hot to mention (I added a word for syllable count and changed spelling on the "to" words). Check it on a syllable counter, but I am pretty sure "desire" is only two syllables, so that is why you needed an extra one.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/26/2014 7:36:00 AM
Thanks, that is a good suggestion.
Date: 5/23/2014 4:29:00 PM
Dear Richard, you definitely got the humor in your poem! I'm still laughing. I am a limerick person, but not a meter maid. If this were my contest, you'd place high! You'll surely get a laugh from Roy! Wishing you success, Carolyn
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/23/2014 4:47:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn I have only written a couple of Limericks so this was a bit of a challenge for me. I love your Meter Maid comment, you have made me smile.
Date: 5/22/2014 4:17:00 AM
very funny and a bit naughty lol Rick good luck in contest hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/22/2014 8:59:00 AM
Thanks Shadow.
Date: 5/21/2014 8:12:00 AM
Oh, My oh MY! Poor guy! ;) Funny limerick, Richard. Be sure to change to to too! I don't know if Roy is strict on syllable count, but the first 2 and the last line are to be 7 syllables and the 3rd and 4th, five syllables each. The rhyming scheme is perfect! ;) Naughty, naughty you! ;)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/21/2014 8:33:00 AM
His rules said 99669. I am not that familiar with the form, he described this as a classic form.
Date: 5/19/2014 9:53:00 PM
I don't know if it's right but it sure is funny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/20/2014 6:19:00 PM
Thanks Tim.
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