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A French verse form. Its rhyme scheme is ABaAabAB and all lines are in iambic tetrameter; the first, fourth and seventh lines are identical, as are the second and final lines, thereby making the initial and final couplets identical as well. The features of the Triolet are: 8 lines. Two rhymes. 5 of the 8 lines are repeated or refrain lines. First line repeats at the 4th and 7th lines. Second line repeats at the 8th line. Rhyme scheme (where an upper-case letter indicates the appearance of an identical line, while a lower-case letter indicates a rhyme with each line designated by the same lower-case or upper-case letter)

My heart was born a sonnet full of rhyme, but the poet in me preferred free verse, as syllable forms became a bore with time. My heart was born a sonnet full of rhyme, but the pen felt matching words was a crime, as ink disputes led to writer's block curse. My heart was born a sonnet full of rhyme, but the poet in me preferred free verse.

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Date: 12/18/2023 9:51:00 AM
Free verse dear poet began in France in the 1800'z; Without the restrictions of a rhyme scheme or metre, poets can focus on artistic expression through similes, metaphors, phrases, images, alliteration and more. vers libre ! much love, james
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Date: 12/12/2023 4:15:00 PM
Ha. We are exact opposites on what we prefer to write. I was born with iambic meter coursing thru me, so even my free verse is often lyrical sounding. It is really cool if you can combine your use of great imagery in a classic form. I love all types of poetry. Great triolet.
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Date: 12/12/2023 9:39:00 AM
Oh wow, I think I can fully resonate with it! You've such an artistic talent of weaving creative and profound themes within such vivid forms and that too so effortlessly.. "My heart was born a sonnet full of rhyme", "but the poet in me preferred free verse.", "as ink disputes led to writer's block curse" Sometimes the mind and heart become chained in a plethora of thoughts and can't bleed in perfection, therefore a freedom of reflection is needed to let the spirit soar, I can relate with this!
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Date: 12/12/2023 7:44:00 AM
I like this one about yourself. Well, you can always use some rhymes in Free Verse. It doesn't have to be rhyme free. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 12/12/2023 7:02:00 AM
HI Silent One, I am always impressed with the versatility of those that write on this site. Enjoyed this triolet.
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Date: 12/12/2023 5:21:00 AM
You won the battle my friend--this one in rhymes. Repeating lines of the poem enhance your theme.
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Date: 12/12/2023 1:31:00 AM
Therein lies a question. Which the poet can bring free to verse in rhyme of answers for each poem and be free to roam truth's couplet. I think for the discipline, this was a clever premise, offspring, disciple line(s). Nice work, Silent One.
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Date: 12/11/2023 5:46:00 PM
Thank you for explaining the form which I am in awe of your execution. My favorite lines are but the pen felt matching words was a crime, as ink disputes led to writer's block curse. Bravo!
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Date: 12/11/2023 5:44:00 PM
Which makes a verse worse s having a curse.
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Date: 12/11/2023 5:44:00 PM
Which makes a verse worse s having a curse.
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Date: 12/11/2023 5:12:00 PM
A truly exceptional triolet my friend. I must say that I find it hard to follow rules and structure. But I lack the tremendous talent you show in every poem you pen, regardless of style. Have a great day Silent One.
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Date: 12/11/2023 4:41:00 PM
Oh, Silent One, I thoroughly relished your triotet. It provided insightfulness. I adore the brevity and the refrain of this form. It is eight lines long, but we are only required to write five. Finding two excellent lines to begin with makes the remainder so much smoother.
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Date: 12/11/2023 4:31:00 PM
SO, in some way I believe all poets pay a price for their verse...free or otherwise for "there is no such thing as a free verse"
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Date: 12/11/2023 3:23:00 PM
And a wonderful free verse poet your are my good man
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Date: 12/11/2023 12:17:00 PM
In curing writer's block, we must focus on what we truly want and turn everything into a muse. I believe it does exist and for some, it rents a space in their home for years. In poetry, I'd always choose the head over the heart. Lovely written silent, you choose the great path.
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Date: 12/11/2023 11:04:00 AM
Hello Silent One , I like your style and your preferences as a poet . Thank you for your comment
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Date: 12/11/2023 10:46:00 AM
Wonderful & very interesting poem!
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Date: 12/11/2023 10:22:00 AM
I dont always like triolets but when you do them triolets too sound beautiful, and yes i do believe you were born a poet, you are my fave poet and poem. I love the line “ as ink disputes led to writer's block curse.” Does writers block exist? I remember you saying it doesnt.. and i also think it had a deeper meaning.. “ born a sonnet wanting to be free verse and liking free verse. Well the heart wants what it wants, ink knows. Pleasure reading you always you inspire me: sending you light always
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Date: 12/11/2023 9:38:00 AM
Absolutely, that inner voice is who you are as a writer...and blessed individual. "True to thine own self" -- really got me thinking with this fine work.
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