Batman and Robin

Batman and Robin were done!
Out cold, on a road, via stun-gun!
-   ‘long came a truck
-   both of them struck
Now it’s just:  “Flatman” and “Ribbon”
5/17/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 17, 2014 at 5:49 PM
Jack ...hhmmm it starts well and then the flow peter's off and never have brackets in a limerick....it separates the line.. but I like the concept...David
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May 21, 2014 at 11:56 AM
I thank you, David, for your assessment - and your opinion. They are both appreciated. Jack C
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