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Running the water Just the right temperature Perfection One toe first Slip in adagio Long deep breaths of warm scented bubbles Then… listen Quietude Lovely marvelousness Sublime moments Insufficient superlatives Time standing still Stretching Extending Prolonging A forgotten world no longer existing Separated only by one thin door But fiercely guarded May as well be a fortress Blissfulness in a tub Read on air by invitation ~ May 4, 2020 'LATE NIGHT POETS' AP: 1st place 2021 Submitted on January 27, 2018

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Date: 5/10/2021 12:20:00 AM
Wow Line i've just listened to the audio and you reallly bring the poem to life with your brilliant audio, BRAVO:-) hugs jan xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/10/2021 5:31:00 AM
lol ~ thank you so much, Jan.

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