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Bath For Two

B lindfolded he leads her down the hall,
A nticipation makes her start to giggle.
T here he lets her dress slide slipping to the floor,
H anding her a red rose he removes the blindfold.

F ascination shows in her excited face,
O ver the floor is a carpet of rose petals,
R ed candles have turned the washroom into a spa.

T he scent of perfumed water fills their senses,
W ater spills as he draws her into the tub.
O ne heart and one soul become one.


Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
10.04.2014
Regina Riddles Contest: Romantic Acrostic
1st place win

Copyright © Brenda Meier-Hans | Year Posted 2014

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Mark Trichet Date: 10/10/2014 5:20:00 PM Loved it Brenda, well done and congrats on top place Login to Reply

Faye Gibson Date: 10/9/2014 6:34:00 PM Brenda, this is just great; love it. Congratulations. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/9/2014 6:50:00 PM Thanks Faye.

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/9/2014 6:21:00 AM Enjoyed this romantic write, Brenda. congrats on the win, Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/9/2014 6:50:00 PM Thanks Dr. Mehta.

Hija De La Luna Date: 10/8/2014 10:11:00 PM utterly romantic, Brenda! love it! Congratulations! Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/9/2014 6:51:00 PM Thanks so much Hija

Reason A. Poteet Date: 10/8/2014 9:48:00 PM What a romantic husband you describe. She is one lucky lady. Congratulations on your fine poem, Brenda. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/9/2014 6:52:00 PM Thanks Reason.

Abdul Malik Date: 10/8/2014 6:56:00 PM I am so glad to see you way up there. Many congrats. Nice write. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/9/2014 6:53:00 PM Thanks for the kind words Abdul .

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/8/2014 3:42:00 PM oh yes, I do remember THIS one. So romantic. Congrats on your great win. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/9/2014 6:54:00 PM Thank you Andrea.

Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/8/2014 1:18:00 PM Congratulations on your magnificent win. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/8/2014 1:56:00 PM Thank you Maurice .

Joyce Johnson Date: 10/8/2014 1:15:00 PM Very romantic. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/8/2014 1:56:00 PM Thank you Joyce

Earl Schumacker Date: 10/8/2014 1:01:00 PM Hi Brenda, Nice little story and a solid win. Congratulations. Take care. Earl Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/8/2014 1:55:00 PM Thanks Earl.

Barbara Gorelick Date: 10/8/2014 12:07:00 PM Oh lord, why couldn't it be me..lol. This is SO romantic. Congrats and enjoy your big win. BG Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/8/2014 1:54:00 PM Thanks Barbara. :-).

Sandra Haight Date: 10/8/2014 11:12:00 AM Brenda -- such a romantic poem! Congratulations on your 1st place win! Sandra Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/8/2014 11:41:00 AM Thanks so much Sandra.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 10/8/2014 10:42:00 AM Congratulations and I enjoyed your poem. God bless you with love and prayers, Thanks for entering ~ Love, Gina Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/8/2014 11:42:00 AM Thank you so much for this beautiful honor Regina.

Jan Allison Date: 10/8/2014 10:42:00 AM we share the podiummmmmmmmmmmm congrats my friend:-) hugs jan xxxx Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/8/2014 11:43:00 AM :-). Thanks Jan, I'm so happy to hear this.

Paul Callus Date: 10/6/2014 8:46:00 AM Ahhhh Brenda.....you are a true romantic at heart! Lovely and seductive acrostic; much enjoyed. // paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 10/8/2014 3:53:00 PM ...back with congratulations...a merited first place!!! Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/6/2014 8:50:00 PM Thank you for your comment Paul.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/5/2014 12:49:00 PM - Oh ... could happily taken me a romantic bath for two ..... thanks for a romantic and beautiful poem Brenda - Enjoy reading it! - (Lovely photo) - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/5/2014 4:03:00 PM Thanks Anne Lise

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/5/2014 11:15:00 AM oozing with sweet flow of romance, Brenda... you really set the mood; lovely!...huggs Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/5/2014 12:49:00 PM Thanks Nette. Now that we are all in the mood? Now what?

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/5/2014 12:35:00 AM OOPs sorry I called you Regina. I just realized that I had glance up at the poem and saw where you wrote regina's name as the sponsor of this contest you were writing for. That's why I wrote that! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/5/2014 12:34:00 AM ohhh, Regina. you have indeed showed us sexy AND romantic. A very good poem from you!!! Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/5/2014 12:47:00 PM That's Ok Casarah, OOPS. Andrea. Just kidding I have Made the same mistake. Glad you like it.

Eve Roper Date: 10/4/2014 10:55:00 PM Enjoyed, wish my husband was that romantic :) eve Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/5/2014 12:44:00 PM Lol Eve, really looks differently.

Arthur Vaso Date: 10/4/2014 9:46:00 PM I'm with Tim on this one, very romantic!!!! Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/4/2014 9:58:00 PM I'm going to need my hot tub back.

Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/4/2014 8:10:00 PM Excellent, the sentence didn't get in the way whatsoever it read as smooth as a babies ass. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/4/2014 9:31:00 PM Maybe! Tim Smith Date: 10/4/2014 8:12:00 PM LOL.......Maybe she has a pond out back....I'll bathe with the ducks

Tim Smith Date: 10/4/2014 7:14:00 PM Is there a sign up sheet ? I'm in. how sensual...hugs Tim Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/4/2014 9:24:00 PM Only in my wildest dreams. Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/4/2014 8:09:00 PM Yeah,Tim the list is long...I'm 440 and you haven't even signed up yet. Tim Smith Date: 10/4/2014 7:27:00 PM I can wait....hugs Jan Allison Date: 10/4/2014 7:21:00 PM LOL it does sound amazing Brenda:-) Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/4/2014 7:19:00 PM Yes Tim, but the list is pretty long. XOXO

Jan Allison Date: 10/4/2014 7:02:00 PM Perfection Brenda! This will do really well my friend! Hugs jan xxx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/4/2014 7:22:00 PM :-) you inspire me Brenda and have helped and encouraged me so much:-) hugs Jan xxx Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/4/2014 7:18:00 PM Thanks so much Jan, also for your help. You are a true friend.