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Basho Inspired Haiku

this wind how it changes direction - my fickle mind - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Basho Inspired Haiku Contest Sponsored by Damned I-Be © 8th January 2022

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Date: 1/15/2022 10:17:00 PM
Ahh Paul still writing such amazing v pieces be it short or long! ;)
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/20/2022 2:01:00 PM
Hi Brenda! Thank you for your lovely comments. Incidentally yesterday I read and enjoyed a couple of your poems; I had not been around much lately. Hope you're keeping well and happy, my friend. // paul
Date: 1/15/2022 5:46:00 PM
this is wonderful Paul...my next haiku just might be a Callus inspired Haiku :)
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Date: 1/13/2022 4:16:00 PM
Paul, Congratulations on you POTD~sorry I missed it~I love the comparison of the changing wind, like a "fickle" mind. I enjoyed this...good luck in the contest! Blessings,Paulette
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Date: 1/13/2022 9:07:00 AM
Such an excellent write! You do Basho proud in merging the human with the natural world. Be well. Brian
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Date: 1/12/2022 5:03:00 PM
Sorry I missed this, Paul. Fabulous haiko Basho style. Congrats on POTD honors. Regards, Charlie
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Date: 1/12/2022 12:48:00 AM
Love it. Congrats on POTD and God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 1/11/2022 4:43:00 AM
Wonderful! Congrats Paul on your POTD.
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Date: 1/11/2022 1:13:00 AM
My internet was down. My belated congratulations.
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Date: 1/10/2022 10:34:00 PM
Basho, not easy, but i like this one.
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Date: 1/10/2022 8:46:00 PM
So true. The wind moves in so many different directions, and our thoughts are the same way. This is deep and powerful, all at the same time. So beautifully written and presented. Congratulations Paul, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 1/10/2022 8:38:00 PM
Congrats on POTD Paul. Enjoyed ~ Debra
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Date: 1/10/2022 1:49:00 PM
Well deserved congrats for a great potd!
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/20/2022 1:59:00 PM
Thank you, Karen. Best regards // paul
Date: 1/10/2022 1:20:00 PM
Paul, absolutely wonderful and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF DAY honor ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
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Date: 1/10/2022 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations for this great POTD :)
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Date: 1/10/2022 12:56:00 PM
Huge congratulations on POTD my friend. Love the depth and beauty of this gem by friend. Message speaks so very well to our existence on this spinning blue marble we call earth. A fine fav.. God bless
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Date: 1/10/2022 9:40:00 AM
Oh Paul, how I love this haiku! This is a trophy winner in my eyes. Bravo! I am Faving this gem! Congratulations on POTD honors. Blessings xxoo
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/19/2022 2:47:00 PM
You are too kind, Connie! Thank you for your lovely reaction, congrats and the FAV. ~Regards & Blessings // paul
Date: 1/10/2022 8:57:00 AM
An excellent haiku, Paul! Congrats on POTD! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 1/10/2022 8:53:00 AM
Very creative with your Haiku Paul... Congratulations on your well deserved POTD honor... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 1/10/2022 8:11:00 AM
Great Haiku, Tom, Congratulations on POTD,
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Date: 1/10/2022 8:10:00 AM
Congratulations dear friend on your well deserved Haiku as poem of the day !
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Date: 1/10/2022 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your p.o.t.d win. A creative write. The wind does change direction by a fickle mind. Have a blessed day/week.......................
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Date: 1/10/2022 6:43:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Paul, Very nicely done..
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Date: 1/10/2022 6:26:00 AM
Paul, congrats on POTD. Such an innovative write. Happy 2022, Gershon
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/18/2022 6:18:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon. Hope the new year is going well for you. Regards // paul
Date: 1/10/2022 6:15:00 AM
A very great haiku. Fickle mind being changed by the wind. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/18/2022 6:19:00 AM
Thank you, Chris. Best regards // paul
Date: 1/10/2022 5:08:00 AM
Back with Congrats Paul on a splendid POTD.
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/18/2022 6:20:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay. Regards // paul
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