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Basho Inspired Haiku

this wind

how it changes direction -

my fickle mind


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Basho Inspired Haiku Contest

© 8th January 2022

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MD Johnson

April 30, 2022 at 9:05 AM

This is fabulous. Enjoyed this one. — MDJ

Paul Callus

May 1, 2022 at 9:55 AM

Thank you MD for reading and enjoying. Best regards // paul

Phyllis Babcock

February 2, 2022 at 6:38 PM

Very nice with this haiku Paul. love phyl

Paul Callus

February 15, 2022 at 11:01 AM

Glad you found it to your liking, Phyllis....thank you. Warm regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

January 29, 2022 at 4:25 AM

That is a fickle mind. I enjoyed reading this creative one. Way to go. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Paul Callus

February 15, 2022 at 10:58 AM

Thank you so much, Sara. Glad you enjoyed it. Best regards // paul

W.A. Cholt

January 28, 2022 at 2:08 PM

Congratulations Paul, on Poem of the day. A gem of a haiku. I particularly like the interweaving of wind and mind.

Paul Callus

February 15, 2022 at 10:57 AM

Thank you on all counts, WA. ~ Best regards // paul

Delice Arleen Skelly

January 27, 2022 at 3:57 AM

Very nice indeed Paul....Delice

Paul Callus

February 15, 2022 at 10:46 AM

Thank you Delice. Enjoy the week ahead! // paul

James Marshall Goff

January 23, 2022 at 7:11 PM

Perfect twist Paul!

Paul Callus

February 15, 2022 at 10:47 AM

Thank you, James. All the best. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

January 22, 2022 at 6:22 AM

Love it!

Paul Callus

January 22, 2022 at 6:25 AM

Thank you, Kim. have a lovely weekend! // paul

Scott Thirtyseven

January 21, 2022 at 3:04 PM

Brilliant.

Paul Callus

January 22, 2022 at 4:26 AM

Thank you, my friend!! All the best // paul

Brenda Chiri

January 15, 2022 at 10:17 PM

Ahh Paul still writing such amazing v pieces be it short or long! ;)

Paul Callus

January 20, 2022 at 2:01 PM

Hi Brenda! Thank you for your lovely comments. Incidentally yesterday I read and enjoyed a couple of your poems; I had not been around much lately. Hope you're keeping well and happy, my friend. // paul

David Mohn

January 15, 2022 at 5:46 PM

this is wonderful Paul...my next haiku just might be a Callus inspired Haiku :)

Paul Callus

January 21, 2022 at 2:20 PM

Thank you for the compliment, David :) We inspire one another! Regards // paul

Paulette Calasibetta

January 13, 2022 at 4:16 PM

Paul, Congratulations on you POTD~sorry I missed it~I love the comparison of the changing wind, like a "fickle" mind. I enjoyed this...good luck in the contest! Blessings,Paulette

Paul Callus

January 21, 2022 at 2:40 PM

Thank you for the congrats and the feedback, Paulette. Have a lovely weekend. Blessings // paul

Brian Sambourne

January 13, 2022 at 9:07 AM

Such an excellent write! You do Basho proud in merging the human with the natural world. Be well. Brian

Paul Callus

January 21, 2022 at 2:32 PM

Thank you for your pleasant comments, Brian. ~ Best regards // paul

Charles Messina

January 12, 2022 at 5:03 PM

Sorry I missed this, Paul. Fabulous haiko Basho style. Congrats on POTD honors. Regards, Charlie

Paul Callus

January 22, 2022 at 4:37 AM

Thank you, Charles. Have a nice day, my friend. Regards // paul

Regina Mcintosh

January 12, 2022 at 12:48 AM

Love it. Congrats on POTD and God bless you always, Love, Gina

Paul Callus

January 22, 2022 at 4:43 AM

Thank you, Gina. May your day be filled with joy and blessings. Warm regards // paul

Jeanne Mcgee

January 11, 2022 at 4:43 AM

Wonderful! Congrats Paul on your POTD.

Paul Callus

January 22, 2022 at 4:44 AM

Thank you, Jeanne; lovely to have you stopping by. Best regards // paul

Victor Buhagiar

January 11, 2022 at 1:13 AM

My internet was down. My belated congratulations.

Paul Callus

January 22, 2022 at 4:51 AM

Hi Victor. Sorry about your internet...without it we kind of feel lost! :) Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul

Harry Horsman

January 10, 2022 at 10:34 PM

Basho, not easy, but i like this one.

Paul Callus

January 22, 2022 at 4:56 AM

Thank you, Harry. Imitating Basho is never going to be easy! Regards // paul

Brandy Nicole

January 10, 2022 at 8:46 PM

So true. The wind moves in so many different directions, and our thoughts are the same way. This is deep and powerful, all at the same time. So beautifully written and presented. Congratulations Paul, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Paul Callus

January 22, 2022 at 6:24 AM

Thank you for your lovely feedback and congrats, Brandy. Hope you're enjoying a nice weekend. ~ Regards & Hugs // paul

Debra L Brown

January 10, 2022 at 8:38 PM

Congrats on POTD Paul. Enjoyed ~ Debra

Paul Callus

January 22, 2022 at 6:40 AM

Thank you, Debra. Have a nice day! // paul

Karen Jones

January 10, 2022 at 1:49 PM

Well deserved congrats for a great potd!

Paul Callus

January 20, 2022 at 1:59 PM

Thank you, Karen. Best regards // paul

Constance La France

January 10, 2022 at 1:20 PM

Paul, absolutely wonderful and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF DAY honor ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Paul Callus

January 23, 2022 at 3:05 AM

Thank you for all the points mentioned above, Constance. Both your feedback and friendship are appreciated. ~ Warm regards // paul

Heidi Sands

January 10, 2022 at 12:59 PM

Congratulations for this great POTD :)

Paul Callus

January 22, 2022 at 6:40 AM

Thank you, Heidi. Hope you're keeping well, my friend. // paul

Robert Lindley

January 10, 2022 at 12:56 PM

Huge congratulations on POTD my friend. Love the depth and beauty of this gem by friend. Message speaks so very well to our existence on this spinning blue marble we call earth. A fine fav.. God bless

Paul Callus

January 22, 2022 at 7:29 AM

Thank you, Robert for the feedback, congrats and the fav...much appreciated. Best regards & blessings // paul