Get Your Premium Membership

Barren Love

I CRAVE your existence, you THIRST for my presence. for I am frail, you are strength...                         -barren LOVE has found a way. I LONG for love devoid resistance- you give with such ease. for I am lost, you are found... -I have found barren LOVE today. naked insight, sacred embrace- moonlit candlelight, touching your flawless face. I CRAVE your presence- you THIRST for my existence. for I am broken, you are whole... -barren LOVE has found a way. I LONG for passion intense- you feed me without condition. for I am in love, and so are you... -for I have found barren LOVE today. October 9, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/31/2018 12:24:00 PM
Congratulations Laura. Creativity at its core.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/30/2018 10:51:00 PM
Lovely, Laura. Congrats on your win.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/10/2017 11:19:00 PM
Very unique and creative, and I love your forming and placement, Laura - you approach poetry as a visual art as well, and I so enjoy that, (Darren does similar) - lovely piece that I greatly enjoyed - congrats on your win - again! :-) <3
Login to Reply
Loo Avatar
Lu Loo
Date: 10/11/2017 9:45:00 AM
many thanks dear Gregory :)
Date: 10/9/2017 6:30:00 PM
What an unusual and tender love poem. Really enjoyed it.
Login to Reply
Loo Avatar
Lu Loo
Date: 10/11/2017 9:44:00 AM
thank you dear Sunlite :)

Book: Shattered Sighs