Barn Owl

I often wonder where you go wise sentinel, who knows somehow that days grow long, time sways and bends. You stay awhile, become our friend Then off you fly, when summer ends What becomes of one we've grown to know who holds the night, on wings composed You perch, clung to a red-tiled scope upon the ridge, the barn roof's slope in the shadow of the evening's grace a silhouette on moonlight's face You are keeper of the nightly watch a ticking clock, when midnight peaks with one eye closed to mock our sleep, the other eye revolves to keep a world in check 'till morning breaks When first the chill of autumn's call, I look for you as twilight falls But, halls of dark are lonely now Without you there, wind can't compare Oh, where, oh, where, my friend are you? For now, I see, the roof is bare When wind echoes a song tonight it calls for you, but you aren't there in silhouette against the moon
___________________________________________ For the "Night Owl" Contest: Sponsored By Kelly Deschler 8/6/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/25/2014 4:22:00 PM
Hi Carrie, Congratulations, In Kelly's "Night Owl" contest.. This is very nice, and epic... LINDA
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Date: 8/25/2014 3:16:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Carrie. So sad that owl is not there any more, but surely it will be returning. Congrats on such a merited win. // paul
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Date: 8/25/2014 11:50:00 AM
Honest question about his other life. Great win, Carrie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/25/2014 11:50:00 AM
Hi Carrie, That is a very well thought out poem with genuine merit. Great images and stylization. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Earl
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Date: 8/25/2014 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations on the win! It was truly a great write.
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Date: 8/25/2014 7:06:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 8/25/2014 6:30:00 AM
I hope he comes back to your roof..we don't see owls around here, wish we did. Congrats Carrie..a fine win. BG
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Date: 8/25/2014 4:35:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/24/2014 9:35:00 PM
Carrie, kindly notify us when the movie debuts as I want to buy my tickets on line to make certain I have a seat! Thanks in advance...
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Date: 8/24/2014 9:14:00 PM
Your poem has such wonderful imagery, and yet there is a beautiful sadness about these words.... A really lovely poem, Carrie! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 8/24/2014 9:09:00 PM
Nicely flowing poem Carrie, congrats.
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Date: 8/6/2014 5:12:00 PM
simply stunning Carrie I loved the imagery. I saw 5 owls at York museum today - all captive so beautiful to see up close but even better in the wild. Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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