Barefoot On the Snow

The sun told me it will rise again;
And send its warmth to the glen,
But it can't soften the coldness in your soul!
So I will walk barefoot on the snow buried in your whole:
Leaving my traces on your heart's lane.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 2:44 PM
Lovely and so precised to the heart with a very good linking understanding to the mind. A definite 7
Boddie Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 5:33 PM
buried in your whole....wow, I Love how that flowed....your talent is so loud and clear....it is the newest music to my ear....;)
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