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Baltimore Senryu

Blood on city streets Who will stop the city's pain We are waiting for peace

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/6/2015 9:03:00 AM

It is hard to see this Matt, I can't imagine how those closer feel to the Baltimore situation. Hugs LINDA

Paul Callus

Date: 5/6/2015 8:15:00 AM

A good present-day senryu; it represents the unrest and problems that effect not only Baltimore, but most parts of the world. We must all strive for peaceful solutions. // paul

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/1/2015 11:01:00 AM

You have given us a reflection of life and laid it bare for all to see. Emile.

Constance La France

Date: 5/1/2015 12:56:00 AM

Matthew, so much said in a few words, so sad the destruction in that city, the unrest and sadness, well done 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, up above

Ettie Christian-Bowling

Date: 4/30/2015 11:56:00 AM

Hello Matthew I am guessing that since you wrote this poem you heard about whats going on in Baltimore I was watching the news last night and saw that there was protests in NYC as well....nice senryu tho :)-Love Ettie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2015 11:54:00 PM

GOOD one, Matt. and yes, I have been to Israel . Went there after Spain for about two or three weeks seeing the path of Jesus . Even ate camel meat!! I have been to nearly every state, except Alaska, Hawaii and a few others.