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Tim Smith

Date: 5/21/2016 7:28:00 AM

So beautiful. You an an exquisite poet and painter with words. Timeo

Paul Callus

Date: 11/27/2014 12:14:00 PM

Hi Charm...as soon as I began reading it I knew it was perfect for Isaiah's contest; alas you deflated my hopes:( Won't you change your mind...for once!! This has got all the ingredients of a great poem; I could never have written something such as this...for a start, it must have a female touch to it:) A fav for me! // paul

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 11/27/2014 6:31:00 AM

"gossamer laces" , I had almost forgotten such things exist---I looked at this painting two or three time without any inspiration---but your interpretation is flawless---love it--I hope it Wins

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/26/2014 1:23:00 PM

as always charmaine painted in style very beautifully penned dear pal

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/26/2014 8:07:00 AM

I like how you made this delightful piece sway, charms... enticed!.. huggs

Tim Smith

Date: 11/25/2014 10:31:00 PM

I can imagine your prince coming for you...exquisite imagery...love this M.S.B. ..... a favorite ....hugs Tim

Dan Helppi

Date: 11/25/2014 10:26:00 PM

I concur with all below, this is grand! What a finale! Wow

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/25/2014 9:13:00 PM

Just Beautiful!!!!

David Brown

Date: 11/25/2014 7:01:00 PM

"virgin-snow,sugar-rose and washed-out pistachio pastels" ....Wow! Your imagery is almost enough to entice an inveterate denier of the divinity of dancing to take an interest.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/25/2014 5:50:00 PM

I love the unique take you have on this Charma from the 'below stairs' point of view:-) hugs Jan