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Smith Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 7:28 AM
So beautiful. You an an exquisite poet and painter with words. Timeo
Callus Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 12:14 PM
Hi Charm...as soon as I began reading it I knew it was perfect for Isaiah's contest; alas you deflated my hopes:( Won't you change your mind...for once!! This has got all the ingredients of a great poem; I could never have written something such as this...for a start, it must have a female touch to it:) A fav for me! // paul
Curtis Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 6:31 AM
"gossamer laces" , I had almost forgotten such things exist---I looked at this painting two or three time without any inspiration---but your interpretation is flawless---love it--I hope it Wins
Mcdaid Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 1:23 PM
as always charmaine painted in style very beautifully penned dear pal
Onclaud Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 8:07 AM
I like how you made this delightful piece sway, charms... enticed!.. huggs
Smith Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 10:31 PM
I can imagine your prince coming for you...exquisite imagery...love this M.S.B. ..... a favorite ....hugs Tim
Helppi Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 10:26 PM
I concur with all below, this is grand! What a finale! Wow
Yvonne Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 9:13 PM
Just Beautiful!!!!
Brown Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 7:01 PM
"virgin-snow,sugar-rose and washed-out pistachio pastels" ....Wow! Your imagery is almost enough to entice an inveterate denier of the divinity of dancing to take an interest.
Allison Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 5:50 PM
I love the unique take you have on this Charma from the 'below stairs' point of view:-) hugs Jan
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