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Ballerina

his hands seemed large he undressed me with his eyes his prize painting wet he painted ripples a moon, no sun a little boat underneath a buoyant waterfall where a contemporary artist moved his wrist gracefully; his full-bodied stroke used a spade ballerina in my bedroom— the waterfalls out in the open 11/8/2021 Become a Painting Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke *contemporary - happening, existing, living, or coming into being during the same period of time (Merriam-Webster)

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Date: 11/11/2021 11:25:00 AM
This appealed to my poetic side and to my artistic painting side, so I thank you and so do they.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2021 5:17:00 PM
So glad! Yay!
Date: 11/11/2021 3:13:00 AM
Have never seen someone writing so beautifully with exquisite imageries, as the picturesque picture is rippling with the vibrant paintbrush! It's a complete portrait in itself! Kudos! Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2021 10:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, silpika!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2021 10:22:00 AM
Thank you so much, silpika!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2021 10:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, silpika!
Date: 11/9/2021 12:14:00 PM
Love this Kim Paints a magical picture for the reader's imagination to paint A ballerina underneath a buoyant waterfall Fantastic
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2021 1:26:00 PM
Thank you, Christopher!
Date: 11/9/2021 10:24:00 AM
Amazing writing... enjoyed very much...have a great day...hugs. Priya
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2021 11:57:00 AM
Hugs to you! Thanks, Priya!
Date: 11/9/2021 5:42:00 AM
Bold, sensual, and beautiful...inspirational ending!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2021 8:24:00 AM
Thank you, Kohava!
Date: 11/9/2021 1:50:00 AM
I have always wished to be a painter, but I could never be one. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2021 5:21:00 AM
Though you paint lovely scenes with your words, dear poet. ~ hugs
Date: 11/8/2021 3:27:00 PM
don't known what to tell of this, a seducer or a painter. it still was exciting, Kim.. good luck in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2021 4:40:00 PM
lol…thanks, Eve
Date: 11/8/2021 2:45:00 PM
Well done Kim. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2021 4:41:00 PM
Thank you, Judy
Date: 11/8/2021 2:04:00 PM
Wow Kim , you have written this well. I felt like I was in the painting :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2021 4:41:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!

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