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Ball of Fire

As it comes up high on the hills It's a sight that fills you with awe To see it rise can be quite a thrill A big ball of fire is what you saw A gem that gives light from so far It's a sight that fills you with awe At night you looked up at a star That shines so bright and bold A gem that gives light from so far And the full moon dressed in gold An orb of light in the sky That shines so bright and bold A gift that come from on high To warm and guide us with its light An orb of light in the sky This ball of fire that shines so bright As it comes up high on the hills To warm and guide us with its light To see it rise can be quite a thrill

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/31/2013 4:29:00 PM
Joseph congrats on your win. A great write indeed. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 1/30/2013 9:29:00 PM
Joseph, a very nice win in David's "one to one" contest~ :-) PD
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Date: 1/28/2013 7:03:00 AM
A Terzanelle made up of only one syllable words - That's not easy to do! Congrats on an awesome win!
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Date: 1/27/2013 10:52:00 PM
An excellent write in this difficult form Joseph. Kudos on your win!
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Date: 1/27/2013 1:01:00 PM
Indeed a thrill each morning! We should only appreciate each day more. A lovely one-word poem !! Congratulations!
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Joseph May
Date: 1/27/2013 3:18:00 PM
thank you Carrie
Date: 1/27/2013 12:39:00 PM
beautiful image....congratulations
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Joseph May
Date: 1/27/2013 3:17:00 PM
thank you Mehnaz
Date: 1/27/2013 12:10:00 PM
Joseph congratulations on your placement, I could almost feel the heat from the sun with this, an excellent write...David
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Joseph May
Date: 1/27/2013 3:16:00 PM
Thank you David....glad I was able to place in your contest
Date: 1/18/2013 10:51:00 PM
I've seen the moon when it is looking bigger than usual and it truly is an awesome sight!!! Good one.
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Joseph May
Date: 1/27/2013 3:19:00 PM
thanks Andrea

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