Balancing the Load

White socks in this pile. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Black ones over here.

I’ll hand wash my negligee; 
             It is much too sheer. . . . . . . . . . . . . .  Lots of colored work clothes
                                                                                          going over here.

Light towels here; dark ones there . . .  . . . . . .  with the ugly dishrags

But in this pile; all underwear!. . . . . . . . . . . . . . One red t-shirt; two in blue

Now I’m almost through.
              Bed sheets here. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . My dark slacks here.
                                                                          I think the piles are done.
                                   
                               In the washer; then the drier!          
                    To make a load feel lighter, I try to make it fun.
          
Written 8/12/14 for the Teeter Totter Poem--Balance the Load Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ebbs Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 11:38 PM
Hey Kiddo, congrats :)
Haight Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 2:26 PM
Andrea, I loved your poem--figuratively "balancing the load" on wash day! I shall think of your fun poem every time I sort laundry! Congrats on your win. Sandra
A. Sharma Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 7:53 AM
Wow Andrea its a perfect one dear! Congrats on huge win!
Mehta Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 6:10 AM
Funny and entertaining write, congrats on the win, Andrea
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 3:49 AM
dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 3:48 AM
dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
Harper Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 11:30 PM
Andrea, thanks for the humor in your phrasing, very fun load and a great way to balance it. Congratulations, thanks for entering. Sorry to be so late posting results, I was out of computer reach for a time.
Johnson Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 8:38 PM
Oh I just throw it all in and mix and match. Then sit back and my head I scratch. Wondering why things look so bad. I swear it was a white shirt I had. Peace. :) Just having fun with words. I'm old enough to know better. Usually. :)
Loving Iii Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 4:57 PM
second laundry poem in a row. must be telling me to go to the laundry mat for a short romance. hey girl I miss you!!! john
Onclaud Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 10:52 AM
such a distinct way to express opposites, andie...laughing all the way... very nice!.. huggs
Sathasivam Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 7:47 AM
Great. Cleverly written and fun too. Enjoyed. Tfs
Kiser Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 6:09 AM
That's the way laundry is...well said.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 1:57 AM
I like a good household ladies poem, u certainly make it fun to read washin. A real poetess only cud do that. Kudos. Nice to read u again.
Anish Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 11:14 PM
Being a bachelor I just go to the laundromat down the block. Good luck in the contest Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Richards Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 7:30 PM
Ha ha.....when I saw the contest, I had a hard time coming up with something......wish I had thought of the washing machine! Mine always sounds as if it will walk away by itself if it gets off balance !!! Good idea you had!
Ryerson Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 3:56 PM
Well, I had fun reading this my friend! Luck in the contest...I hand wash my negligee too (Shhhh, don't tell anyone)
Lamoureux Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 3:26 PM
I like this piece but for some reason feel you should use "there" instead of "here". For me here feels a bit awkward and lacks the seperation which would give this teetertotter balance.
Austin Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 2:15 PM
Fun. Throw in the clothes I was drenched in the other day when a cloud burst caught me unprepared. Love, daver
Philibert Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 11:46 AM
you have a great sense of fun...
Horsman Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 11:18 AM
clever, like the shape....
Mehta Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 9:30 AM
What a unique approach quite homely, Andrea
Sirak Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 8:21 AM
very original take on the theme. I think you have a winner! You can even find poetry in dirty clothes.
Chutani Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 6:03 AM
so clever Andrea, you are thinking poetry even washing clothes- a very fine balance- only few can achieve this. Hats off. gl in contest. Mohan
Manassian Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 5:45 AM
Sounds like LOTS of fun! ;) I see you took a very original take on these theme, Andrea. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for your visits to my work. Yes, I need to follow my own advice and visit more often. Hugs
Allison Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 3:46 AM
Fabulous Andrea - I do the same - sadly now son is here the colours in some of his clothes tend to run so i end up hand washing them - grrrr Kids! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxxx
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