Baggage

I'm going to drop all my baggage here.
It's going to make a loud noise, I'm sure,
But I'm going to walk away and not look back.
I do not own its noise
And yet, my dear friends,
If a sweet metallic vibration
Of brash against stone
Whooshes an end to this sad symphony,
Well, I'll take that.
I will store that sound away in my heart
In a place where no one needs to 
Hear a damn word about it,
For you see, some treasures must be kept unknown
Just as some baggage must be kept astrewn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Babcock Avatar
October 1, 2008 at 12:58 PM
We all carry baggage and if we drop all the baggage it may expose our very soul. But treasures we keep in that special compartment. God Bless Phyl
Lakhera Avatar
October 1, 2008 at 6:18 AM
I loved this. Very deep. I'm not sure what to quote. Its just very beautiful. Its so true, some treasures must be kept unknown. Very nicely penned. Take care, Chitra.
Harrington Avatar
September 30, 2008 at 10:41 PM
mayday, i am stuck inside this poem and i can't get out...
Harrington Avatar
September 30, 2008 at 10:39 PM
i love this poem. and why is it such a concept that we are so immune to doing? why? maybe we are afraid to see who we are without the baggabe. again, love the poem
Harrington Avatar
September 30, 2008 at 10:39 PM
great flow and the drop the baggage ideal is all i and probably others have had to hang on to for so long. once we drop it ahhh. why did we wait so long.
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September 30, 2008 at 10:36 PM
great flow and the drop the baggage ideal is all i and probably others have had to hang on to for so long. once we drop it ahhh. why did we wait so long.
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