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My father hung a swing from the old oak tree, a present for his grand kids to enjoy. The swing was such a pleasant sight to see and was my children’s best loved, cherished toy. A present for his grand kids to enjoy, it's weathered with the time and shows its age and was my children’s best loved cherished toy when they were at the backyard swinging stage. Its weathered with the time and shows its age, still holding many memories within when they were at the backyard swinging stage and I still hear the laughter see the grins. Still holding many memories within I think back on the days that long since passed and I still hear the laughter see the grins. If you could only cause good times to last. I think back on the days that long since passed. The swing was such a pleasant sight to see. If you could only cause good times to last. My father hung a swing from the old oak tree. 7/1/2020 Proud Pantoum Poetry Contest Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 2/28/2021 6:48:00 PM
Lovely Pantoum on memories of childhood swinging, Janis, congratulations:)
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Date: 2/28/2021 12:58:00 PM
Great Rhyming Pantoum , Janis.Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/1/2020 3:18:00 PM
such wonderful childhood memories I think this is the most popular picture of the three, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/1/2020 3:08:00 PM
Wonderful memories made...one of the things I always loved to do as a kid. Good luck in the contest...I think you have a winner here. :D
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