Backlash

The publisher of Roald Dahl’s books
Thought changes should be made
To make the books “inclusive,”
But attention has been paid

With many writers speaking out
To criticize the plan
(Despite the fact that Dahl’s ideas
Made many not a fan).

An example that I read of
Would remove the use of “fat”
If a character was overweight – 
Now what’s the use of that?

What they’d substitute, I wonder;
Still, most children are aware
Of dishonesty in writing
As in life, which isn’t fair.

Yet another word replacement
Would be “parent” used instead
Of both “mother” and of “father,”
If one’s gone – divorced or dead.

Or if someone has two mommies
Or two dads, perhaps they mused
That by substituting “parent,”
Kids would not then be confused.

Still, a writer’s words are sacred
And reflective of the times,
Therefore, posthumous replacements
Feel like literary crimes.

Now the publisher’s decided,
After unexpected flak,
There’ll be two competing versions,
Which, to me, seems out of whack.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Volumes Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 1:22 AM
Belated Congrats Ilene, I am trying to catch up (slowly) on all I have missed. So glad you were honored with POTD for this one. We mustn't upset the children ... we must not make a fuss ... but if truth be known ... the kids know more than us ...
Flood Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 3:22 PM
Belated congratulations on this topical POTD, Ilene. Wholeheartedly agree with your every sentiment. Terry
Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 4:15 AM
Yes, there is much going on in the world that is not exactly right, but some things do make for a better world. Good topic upon which to write a poem. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on your poem being the POTD. Sara
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:27 PM
thank you, sara! i wish there were fewer of the negative things, though...
Parker Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 5:59 PM
Woke revisionist history could obliterate much literature. What would we learn from homogenous pablum? POTD to be sure. ~;o]
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:26 PM
thank you, arlo, for taking the time to comment...
Koplin Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 5:45 PM
Your rhymes and words flow so well! Well written and congratulations on potd!!
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:26 PM
thanks for that lovely comment, mark!
Awtry Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 1:33 PM
BRAVO! And congratulations!
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:26 PM
many thanks, p.s.!
Wolf Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 12:01 PM
Write on, Ilene. Here's to keeping great literature in its historic milieu!
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:25 PM
thank you, gershon! i appreciate hearing from you!
Anaya Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 10:54 AM
I pulled up the article, Fox News covering it, the (fake news) station, I looked for a real news station. Puffin UK and the late author's estate came under scrutiny after updating passages in the U.K. editions of books like "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory" to appeal to modern readers. Congratulations on POTD Ilene!! I really enjoy your daily posts and am thankful for them! ~Anaya
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:25 PM
thank you so much, anaya! yeah, it's so sad to know that we can't count on some news stations to tell the truth.
Slaughter Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 10:35 AM
So wonderful to see you on POTD again, Ilene...it doesn't happen nearly often enough, in my opinion.
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:24 PM
oh, jim! i am so appreciative of your unwavering support!
Roper Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 9:54 AM
Ilene, congratulations on POTD. Many blessings my friend
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:23 PM
thanks for reaching out, eve!
Baker Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 9:12 AM
Congratulations on your poem of the day, Ilene! Thank you for sharing your thoughts through poetry, my friend. Bill
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:23 PM
thanks, bill! i guess it's easier than standing on a street corner and waving a sign around...
Chuuk Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 7:44 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Ilene :)
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:22 PM
thank you, fin!
Ireland Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 7:21 AM
Well said ilene. I'm waiting for some person to start on Shakespeare. Meanwhile at our Art Gallery Cafe I ordered a coffee incorrectly. I ordered a B@@@k and was told it was, correctly coffee, with out milk. I asked what colour a coffee without milk was and was called a trouble causer. Eventually I got my coffee. Congrats on POTD. Caucasian Hued Precipitation Female and the seven Persons Of Restricted Growth - that's the PC title of a certain popular pantomime. ;)
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:22 PM
thanks, terry! i don't know if that coffee story is true, but if so, it highlights the ridiculousness of what is going on today. (i've already shared this with a few people.) love the snow white title - hilarious!
La France Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 6:29 AM
Ilene, congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings, Constance
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:20 PM
thank you very much, constance!
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February 28, 2023 at 6:09 AM
Oh let’s just burn all the books now and get it over with, the Nazi solution! So I wonder what they will call ‘The magic finger’ now (The bird) No that can’t be right can it? congratulations on a brilliant POTD, Ilene cheers David
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:20 PM
thank you, david! it's frightening to think that anything can be compared to the nazi era, but unfortunately, that does seem to be the case.
Calasibetta Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 5:51 AM
Our new culture wants to eradicate truth. There is this surge to recreate humanity in their own image. Thanks for writing this....should be on billboards throughout the world. Paulette
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:19 PM
wow! thank you, paulette!
Ireland Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 7:28 AM
Hear hear!!!!!!
Fowler Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 5:36 AM
I believe changing history is out of whack too Ilene. Brilliant write! Congratulations on top honors for POTD! :)
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:18 PM
thank you, linda alice! much appreciated!
Messina Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 4:53 AM
This is PHAT, Ilene...in other words BOMB. Which are two words that are commonly used by youngsters, these days. Don't be offended, in fact, feel good because both these words to the youngsters means "AWESOME" I really love this! Congratulations on POTD...Charlie
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:18 PM
thank you, charlie! i don't think my poems have been called phat or da bomb before, but i'm flattered!
Lawless Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 4:37 AM
..."sticks and stones will break my bones but words will never hurt me"....or so we shouted in our youth. I guess the future of "literature" will be "fill in the blank books". ...."it was a _______ day, the sun____ on______ as ______in the ____." Hey, maybe I'll write one of these. use it a template for a contest theme.
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:17 PM
ha! good idea, john!
Ireland Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 7:23 AM
Sadly you may be right John.
Feeley Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 4:32 AM
Congrats Ilene on this POTD. Well said. I think the thought police/language police should forget about what is already written and do the hard work of actually writing and publishing.
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:16 PM
ha! that would be a refreshing change! thank you, elizabeth!
Gentile Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 4:16 AM
I so agree Ilene with your thoughts expressed in such a beautifully poetic way! Congratulations on your POTD honors !
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:16 PM
i appreciate the comment, mike! thanks for stopping by...
Turner Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 4:11 AM
Very well written as alway, Ilene. I saw it on Sunday Morning. I think it is all BS. All of this woke crap is a load of nonsense. I'll stop there before I say something ugly.Congratulations on POTD
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:15 PM
thanks, daniel! it is hard to believe that this is going on, but it doesn't seem to be stopping. scary!
Kitchin Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 3:39 AM
Ilene, thought provoking, congratulations on POTD!
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:14 PM
thank you, tania!
Kyser Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 3:05 AM
It seems so distasteful to award a poem of the day when so many are written at night - deeply offensive, I tell you! Keep writing, Ilene, I always enjoy reading your muses! :-)
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:14 PM
thank you, jeff! i'm not sure when they award these, but they don't even notify the poet that his/her poem has been chosen! if comments didn't mention it, i wouldn't even know...
Mcintosh Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 2:37 AM
I don't believe I could follow restrictions.... it feels like it would be fake somehow, not from the "voice" that is each heart's gift to the reading world. I like your poem. Wonderfully done. Congrats on POTD. God bless you, Love, Gina
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:12 PM
thank you, gina! i think i'd have a hard enough time if an editor wanted to change any of my words, but if the word police tried it, i'd go bonkers!
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