Back To Eden—stimulating

Temperately cooled shade 
From Cedar trees off the 
Coast of Lebanon
Shielded our state of 
Nudity.  Sincerely we
Speculated; as I wonderfully 
Whispered in her esthetic ears: 
"Eve my emphatically enlightened, 
This garden is stimulating 
Like paradise." As
Sweet musical rapture 
Soothed our souring 
Souls from melodious 
Harps of grander, 
She warmly whispered, 
"Just let your tantalizingly 
Soft sizzling fingers 
Entwined with the 
Hair curling on the back of 
My warm neck, 
While I taste your lips" 
Splendidly we sipped warned 
Warbler feathered wine  
From Macedonia’s vine, as 
Our bodies tingled
With rapture for—the
Honey to come…

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Dedicated to LMB and all the Eves in the contest.
Mar sin leat!

9th Place Winner
Adam in Eden Contest
Sponsored by Linda-Marie Bariana
6/15/10

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Loveless Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 10:43 AM
Please get as many people as possible to read Hush Missing Child <3
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 8:34 PM
oh, it looks like THIS one got a win then? Way to go. I really like this one!
Kendrick Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 3:44 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Very passionate write...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
Fraser Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 1:44 PM
Joseph, many congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's fine contest >> James
Mehta Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 5:25 PM
Congrats on the win
Sweetheart Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 4:50 PM
Congrats Joseph on your success in my ADAM in Eden contest with this dynamic write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Flach Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 11:55 AM
Nicely done Joseph. Absolutely, stunning. Joe
Neels Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 8:32 AM
Wow, I had to read it again.. Absolutely love this piece.. Captivating and erotic ~ rgds Wilma
Sweetheart Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 7:51 AM
WOW.. did u put this in my contest? Joseph this is very unique .. dedicate to your EVE of choice and do so as I am closing my contest tonight... thankxxx for your wonderful and many comments so expressive and so uplifting too.. appreciate.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"..is Sheila your lady?
Gilly Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 10:21 PM
Thankyou!(: youre a great writer as well(: id love it if youd read my new one i wrote(:
Buys Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 3:18 PM
Seductive and so well written, you sure nailed this one. Well done. Regards Heidie
Tideswell Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 12:05 PM
I love this, your word choice is just superb, lots of great alliteration, and it's one hell of a steamy write without being crass. Very well written.
Austin Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 9:02 AM
Exotic-erotic is the form here. You absolutely capture the sense of foreign soils and oils. Very warm and wonderful write. Love, daver
Stella Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 7:37 AM
ok not having passion without cool drink out of still lol omg joe you got those juices flowing for this one outstanding write here loved the imagery I want mango next time lol with umbrella thanks again my friend for your kind comments
Hales Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 1:13 AM
Wowowowo that makes my skin tingle ..to me that is the wait before whats gonna happen between them really enjoyed !!! sarah x
Mehta Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 7:55 PM
Well penned expressions of stimulation. enjoyed
Devonshire Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 7:09 PM
Well, that does it, Joseph. I have to add you to my list of favorite poets. This is an amazing account of the sensual side of "Eden." Yet another gem from you. So glad you're posting again. Brilliant! Love, Carolyn
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May 29, 2010 at 4:51 PM
excelent write, truely enjoyed, hope you have a nice memorial weekend . P.D.
Jordan Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 4:39 PM
Joseph my friend this poem is amazing as in WOW- So subtle while at the same time being so tantalizing - Outstanding poetry Joseph - I took my last final Thursday and got a 94 on it, which ended a perfect school year. Thank you for all of your encouragement and support not to mention your priceless friendship, YF4L, God Bless you Joseph, mj
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