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What is man that he should make much of his years though they bend him like a heavy snow? - Black Elk

     As we look back 
through the prism 
    we have built
     we take not of what 
happened before darkness 
     ends the tale forever
Catching a glimpse
     of almost - forgotten years 
which have passed quickly, 
   waves striking an ever changing shoreline
   As we gaze through this 
prism
    we take note of 
beginnings 
We've learned much 
in the crucible of experience
   An uneasy time 
        awaits us
Letting the vapors of night
      surround us 
we find that shadows 
speak for themselves 
something within us 
    still dares to ask
questions with no answers
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 5:33 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments on my writing Matthew. I wish you continued inspiration that you may always write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol
Maverick Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 4:03 PM
Really pleased to read your words today Matthew, introspective interesting inviting.. are some of my reactions..
Mehta Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 6:01 PM
Profound and thought provoking expressions, Matthew
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August 27, 2011 at 3:49 PM
Matthew, this is a profound write on several levels...the form you've chosen mirrors the "waves striking an ever changing shoreline", which mirrors the prism of our experience...beautifully done! Then you bring this observation to an even more profound conclusion to that "something within us still dares..." That is our shared humanity. Great poem...thank you for stopping by and commenting on mine.
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