Back Seat

We lie back listening 
to the popping of stars in their dark pods.
I fish for words 
that are not raw and wriggling. 
You smoke a spiral staircase.
The car keeps swaying in our heads
over a shock absorbing silence.
I know you are looking through me, 
searching for love-bones
on a distant back seat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 11:29 AM
When you find these words, Eric, "I fish for words that are not raw and wriggling. " please throw them out into a forest. I like the ones you already have.
Ashford Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 12:20 PM
LOL, okay then. Thank you.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 12:20 PM
I think this my favourite so far. Brings to mind cohen playing in a natural born killers scene. Groovy poetry.
Ashford Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 12:56 PM
Hi Maureen, I never saw that movie. It could be a Lenard Cohen song though - sort of. Cool that it worked so well for you!
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