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Back Bite

BACK BITE! -Dharga Nagar Safa My Back,my home, Back bone,it's roof like a camp pole I carry my slice of bread on my back, As a bread WINNER winning only the defeats in life, Back bite, With the mouth but without teeth, The wound,no cure in health Tell me anything to my heart,in front, But don't back bite, It is breaking not my heart but my back bone!

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Alexis Y.

Date: 3/9/2021 4:40:00 PM

Hi Muhammad, Great first poem. I agree, with the overall message within this write. Having a strong backbone is important. Have a great day. PS, Thanks for stopping by my page:-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/20/2020 5:26:00 AM

Cool first poem! Well done last line! Really puts the bite in your poem ;)

Cynthia Jones

Date: 1/3/2015 8:17:00 PM

This is an excellent write Safa. We all have enough to carry on our backs, without people adding to it. Well done. Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate eit. *S* Cynthia AKA **Jones** hehe

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 1/17/2015 1:43:00 AM

Thank you dear poet Jones.God bless you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/12/2014 10:51:00 AM

Muhammad, Congratulations, with your awesome rejection poem.... LOVE LINDA

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 1/17/2015 1:45:00 AM

Thank you dear poet Linda.God bless you, .

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/12/2014 10:18:00 AM

Dropping again to congratulate you,

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 1/17/2015 1:47:00 AM

Thank you again dear poet Dr.Ram, a great Indian.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/11/2014 11:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning poem and love and prayers ~ Thank you so much for your entry ~ God bless you always ~ Gina

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 1/17/2015 1:48:00 AM

Thank You dear poet Regina.God bless you too.

Hija De La Luna

Date: 8/18/2014 4:17:00 AM

i love this write! thanks for dropping by and leaving some kind words!

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 8/18/2014 4:25:00 AM

Thanks Luna.

Brianna Laureano

Date: 5/19/2014 11:41:00 AM

This one is my favorite your writing is really neat very good thank you for sharing it .

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 5/19/2014 11:43:00 AM

Thank you.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/6/2014 7:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Muhammad

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 5/6/2014 8:18:00 AM

Thank you Dr.God bless you.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/27/2014 11:45:00 PM

I don't think I've read any of your poems, but your first poem is good. In life we have to have a strong back bone. A warm welcome to Poetry Soup.... Lucilla

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 4/28/2014 12:01:00 AM

Thank you so much Lucilla! It's very encouraging.please find time to visit my rest of 74 numbers of poems and comment.We I I try to creat a world of peace via literature.