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Baby's Eyes Shine

Baby's Eyes Shine Baby's sweet sky glows glitteringly blue. Beautiful mirrors reflect in her eyes! Such grace trumps any rainbow that may shine. That newly born smile casts a rainbow shine, reflection in those soft crystal clear eyes decorates her hair and ribbon so blue! Softest twinkles in her dazzling sweet eyes, radiates heavenly love that casts shine upon her birthday dress so very blue! Love basks softly as those great blue eyes shine! 07/ 15/ 2014 craig cornish Contest Name Tritina Challenge 1 original, poem on the theme of .............A Baby Write a new poem about a newborn and take it where you creatively will impress me

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Casarah Nance

Date: 8/4/2014 4:27:00 PM

Yay Grats on your win sugar well done!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/4/2014 8:50:00 AM

A new favorite, congratulations.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/4/2014 7:59:00 AM

And back again wid big congrats Robert! Certainly a winner my friend!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/3/2014 7:35:00 AM

Then sweet and fresh, congratulations,, Robert. I enjoyed your win. Linda

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 8/3/2014 6:24:00 AM

this is very colourful and descriptive, a nice bit of alliteration in there too - congrats on your win! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/2/2014 8:44:00 PM

wow, I had not read this one of yours yet. It is really really sweet. Very pretty these images. Great job, and congratulations.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/2/2014 3:29:00 PM

Hi Robert...you enchanted me by those blue eyes and baby smile! Lovely write. Congrats on your lovely win. // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/2/2014 2:44:00 PM

well deserved win, Robert.. hearty congrats.. huggs

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/2/2014 1:44:00 PM

Oh those blue eyes..an adorable poem, one of my favorites. congrats my dear. BG

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/2/2014 12:52:00 PM

Well done, Robert. Could see the blue sparkle and I liked it. Congratulations.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/16/2014 12:42:00 PM

Robert this is subtle heartfelt n very lovely! A sure winner evidently,, gl in contest my dear friend!

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/17/2014 9:10:00 PM

Thank you my good friend. Was written with memories of my own daughter in mind!

Monterey Sirak

Date: 7/16/2014 8:48:00 AM

Your words dazzle with the brilliance of a pure love spoken aloud. Newborns can remind us of possibilities.

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/17/2014 9:09:00 PM

Thanks much my friend. Children are blessings that teach us to remember innocence and purity..

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/16/2014 5:50:00 AM

Babies light up the world. Spoken from a delighted grandmother of a 2 year old granddaughter. I loved your poem that captures that love.

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/17/2014 9:08:00 PM

Thank you my friend!!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/15/2014 8:50:00 PM

Now what shall I do? Hope that I can write something to match this..? Don't think so..BG

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/15/2014 9:07:00 PM

My friend, I have great confidence you can do so! I hope to see your entry and I know it will be a real gem!!!

Robert Gruhn

Date: 7/15/2014 8:09:00 PM

Robert, good piece, hey brother poet what happened? Haven't heard a word from ya in weeks, don't tell me you've joined the uppity ones here with their gold stars! ;))) Peace, Robert

Robert Gruhn
Date: 7/15/2014 9:31:00 PM

No problem bro, try checkin my latest poems! :)))

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/15/2014 9:06:00 PM

Sorry my friend. I have been busier than a cat covering skat on a hot tin roof. Too many sticks in the fire and having to take care of my ailing 87 year old mother. I apologize for not replying to any that Ive missed..

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/15/2014 8:03:00 PM

Thank you my friend. This was such an enjoyable exercise for me! I truly thank the contest sponsor for giving me cause to stretch my horizons!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/15/2014 7:58:00 PM

stunning imagery, a charming write and I really enjoy the form it its written in. Good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xx