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'"babylon the Great"

from your “Shores Of Babylon.” “Babylon The Great” Seducer, thou are wicked Babylon, And be silver tongued as serpent slither. With souls to credit thou doeth bond, Conformed to thy way, they soon do wither. Unholy wine be, your fornication, For worldly kings to you are submitted. Deceit in lies hide your convocation, For many dear souls thou hath outwitted. Thou are drunken on the blood of many, Ridding on your beast as it was written: Who has no conscience nor gives a penny, Of judgment’s truth shall thou be smitten. Upon thy forehead written in scarlet, "Babylon the Great, Mother of Harlots." For Contest: Criticize Me In Honor of: Deborah Guzzi Placed #5

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Date: 7/30/2010 12:36:00 PM
congratulations, I knew she would like this! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/30/2010 5:18:00 AM
Congratulations John on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Critcise Me". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/30/2010 1:57:00 AM
excellect, congratulations on your win in the contest. Harry
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Date: 7/25/2010 4:33:00 PM
"Powerful!" ~ Hello Dear Gifted John Freeman! You know, somehow I can sense this gentle and precious soul inside of You ~ Its always very nice, and beautiful to see ~ Again, extremely strident poem, for those whom it need perhaps be, within whatever way shape or form...."Much Warmth & Love," John!:) ~
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Date: 7/25/2010 2:46:00 PM
I think you did great with your sonnet here. I could not possibly critque one of her poems either. I just took a little poem of hers I liked and made a sonnet about the theme. I think many are doing that way. Good luck with her fun contest! lUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/25/2010 10:41:00 AM
A meaningful write.
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Date: 7/24/2010 9:39:00 PM
that was a lovely, powerful write, thoroughly enjoyed
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Date: 7/24/2010 9:28:00 PM
You did exactly the "right" thing John...I did not say anyone had to be mean to me LOL or "roast" me ..they could just do as you did...use a work of mine to create a whole different verse of their own, thank you as always for your kindness. Just great to see how you are growing!
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