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Looking in and waving at me Up on the tenth floor Out my office window Dangling from a thread Swinging like an acrobat Eight little quivering legs Swaying free in the breeze How did you get here Way up at this height Sweet itty bitty spider AP: 1st place 2020, 3rd place 2022 Posted on November 5, 2019

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Date: 11/10/2019 3:53:00 PM
Nothing sweet about spider!!
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Date: 11/10/2019 8:16:00 PM
Better when it's on the other side of the window. LOL
Date: 11/6/2019 8:27:00 AM
I guess this spider wanted a web with a great view. : ) Nice one my friend.
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Date: 11/6/2019 10:05:00 AM
LOL this spider has class.
Date: 11/6/2019 2:03:00 AM
I do love seeing the spider; they are so pretty!
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Date: 11/6/2019 2:17:00 AM
Thanks, Caren.
Date: 11/5/2019 10:32:00 PM
Eight little quivering legs... Nice poem.. It has a surprise element..
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Date: 11/5/2019 11:54:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Jenish.

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