Paula Goldsmith Poet Ode

Baby Girl

It is a beautiful spring morning,                                                                           a baby girl has been born.                                                                                She is wrapped in a pink blanket~it is so warming,                                        she is wrapped in love by her parents~sound a horn.                                         As she grows and plays,                                                                                 she will learn the weight of the world is on her shoulders in many ways.                                                                                                        She will have many goals in life,                                                                         one could be as a wife.                                                                                      She may want to be a doctor~astronaut~teacher~world leader,                                                                                           it will all be up to her even as a lip reader.                                                       A mother and her firstborn,                                                                                with many little ones of her own to raise.                                                      Today on this beautiful spring morning a baby girl was born,                                                                                      tomorrow the sky will be her's to own and blaze.   

 

Date Written: 3/23/2022

2 Place

TRIBUTE TO WOMENContest Judged: 4/22/2022 
Sponsored by: Beata Agustin

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Len Gasun April 23, 2022 at 4:32 AM Such a very beautiful and heartwarming poem dedication to this great woman my dearest friend Paula. I extremely enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Congratulations on your win! Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs Paula Goldsmith April 25, 2022 at 9:40 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have is wonderful win with my "Baby Girl" write. Glad you enjoyed this this one. Have a great/blessed~~day/week..............

Christuraj Alex April 23, 2022 at 12:35 AM "the sky will be her's to own and blaze" - Great optimism. Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith April 25, 2022 at 9:39 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have is wonderful win with my "Baby Girl" write. Yes "tomorrow the sky will be her's to own and blaze." So True. Have a great/blessed~~day/week..............

Beata Agustin April 22, 2022 at 9:57 PM Congrats! Thanks for sharing this ode. God bless you. Paula Goldsmith April 25, 2022 at 9:37 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have is wonderful win with my "Baby Girl" write. Have a great/blessed~~day/week..............

Bill Baker April 2, 2022 at 4:11 PM Another precious blessing from our Creator God. Bless this child, give her peace and wisdom, Lord. Amen. Thanks for sharing, Paula. Hugs, Bill Paula Goldsmith April 3, 2022 at 7:51 AM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this Baby Girl write. Yes, a precious blessing from God. Have a great/blessed day..................

Anil Deo March 25, 2022 at 10:44 AM Well- said. Each life has a multiverse in potential and value ( live). ThanX for reading my haiku today Paula ): Paula Goldsmith March 25, 2022 at 11:57 AM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed~day/weekend..................

JC Brul March 23, 2022 at 9:32 PM "tomorrow the sky will be her's to own and blaze". Love that parting line. All the best..._JCB Paula Goldsmith March 25, 2022 at 11:56 AM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you love the last line of this write. Have a great/blessed~day/weekend..................

Panagiota Romios March 23, 2022 at 7:31 PM Very touching.chock full of imagery and touches our souls, Pangie Paula..,, I do know We do not add on ad! I should send you some of my poems with ads about God. Above it?.....a disgusting ad relating to a bodily function ? Poets...contact PS to block ads. It costs money! Pangie Paula Goldsmith March 25, 2022 at 11:55 AM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this touching write. Have a great/blessed~day/weekend..................

Paul Callus March 23, 2022 at 2:54 PM I can relate to your lovely poem, Paula. I was lucky to have a baby girl, and still remember clearly how much joy she brought. ~ Warm regards & blessings // paul Paula Goldsmith March 24, 2022 at 9:38 AM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. Good memories are the best. Have a great/blessed day as you write away...................

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 23, 2022 at 1:56 PM Paula, your wonderful poem, about a most joyous event, was written with beauty and eloquence. Best wishes, Evelyn Paula Goldsmith March 24, 2022 at 9:36 AM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this joyous event write. Have a great/blessed day as you write away...................

Debra L Brown March 23, 2022 at 12:26 PM Hi! Paula, I enjoyed the poem, nicely written. Blessings ~ Debra Paula Goldsmith March 24, 2022 at 9:35 AM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this Baby Girl write. Have a great/blessed day as you write away...................

Sotto Poet March 23, 2022 at 12:17 PM Paula, your ode is profound and thought-provoking. Your analogies and symbolism are exquisite. As a reminder, if this is for the contest, I believe you exclude the theme and sponsor details. blessings Paula Goldsmith March 24, 2022 at 9:34 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your kind words. You made my day. Thanks. Have a great/blessed day as you write away...................