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Baby Girl

It is a beautiful spring morning, a baby girl has been born. She is wrapped in a pink blanket~it is so warming, she is wrapped in love by her parents~sound a horn. As she grows and plays, she will learn the weight of the world is on her shoulders in many ways. She will have many goals in life, one could be as a wife. She may want to be a doctor~astronaut~teacher~world leader, it will all be up to her even as a lip reader. A mother and her firstborn, with many little ones of her own to raise. Today on this beautiful spring morning a baby girl was born, tomorrow the sky will be her's to own and blaze. Date Written: 3/23/2022 2 Place TRIBUTE TO WOMENContest Judged: 4/22/2022 Sponsored by: Beata Agustin

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Len Gasun

Date: 4/23/2022 4:32:00 AM

Such a very beautiful and heartwarming poem dedication to this great woman my dearest friend Paula. I extremely enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Congratulations on your win! Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/25/2022 9:40:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have is wonderful win with my "Baby Girl" write. Glad you enjoyed this this one. Have a great/blessed~~day/week..............

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/23/2022 12:35:00 AM

"the sky will be her's to own and blaze" - Great optimism. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/25/2022 9:39:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have is wonderful win with my "Baby Girl" write. Yes "tomorrow the sky will be her's to own and blaze." So True. Have a great/blessed~~day/week..............

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/22/2022 9:57:00 PM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this ode. God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/25/2022 9:37:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have is wonderful win with my "Baby Girl" write. Have a great/blessed~~day/week..............

Bill Baker

Date: 4/2/2022 4:11:00 PM

Another precious blessing from our Creator God. Bless this child, give her peace and wisdom, Lord. Amen. Thanks for sharing, Paula. Hugs, Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/3/2022 7:51:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this Baby Girl write. Yes, a precious blessing from God. Have a great/blessed day..................

Anil Deo

Date: 3/25/2022 10:44:00 AM

Well- said. Each life has a multiverse in potential and value ( live). ThanX for reading my haiku today Paula ):

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/25/2022 11:57:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed~day/weekend..................

Jcb Brul

Date: 3/23/2022 9:32:00 PM

"tomorrow the sky will be her's to own and blaze". Love that parting line. All the best..._JCB

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/25/2022 11:56:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you love the last line of this write. Have a great/blessed~day/weekend..................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/23/2022 7:31:00 PM

Very touching.chock full of imagery and touches our souls, Pangie Paula..,, I do know We do not add on ad! I should send you some of my poems with ads about God. Above it?.....a disgusting ad relating to a bodily function ? Poets...contact PS to block ads. It costs money! Pangie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/25/2022 11:55:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this touching write. Have a great/blessed~day/weekend..................

Paul Callus

Date: 3/23/2022 2:54:00 PM

I can relate to your lovely poem, Paula. I was lucky to have a baby girl, and still remember clearly how much joy she brought. ~ Warm regards & blessings // paul

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/24/2022 9:38:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. Good memories are the best. Have a great/blessed day as you write away...................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/23/2022 1:56:00 PM

Paula, your wonderful poem, about a most joyous event, was written with beauty and eloquence. Best wishes, Evelyn

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/24/2022 9:36:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this joyous event write. Have a great/blessed day as you write away...................

Debra L Brown

Date: 3/23/2022 12:26:00 PM

Hi! Paula, I enjoyed the poem, nicely written. Blessings ~ Debra

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/24/2022 9:35:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this Baby Girl write. Have a great/blessed day as you write away...................

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/23/2022 12:17:00 PM

Paula, your ode is profound and thought-provoking. Your analogies and symbolism are exquisite. As a reminder, if this is for the contest, I believe you exclude the theme and sponsor details. blessings

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/24/2022 9:34:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your kind words. You made my day. Thanks. Have a great/blessed day as you write away...................