Baby Blue Dreams

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As I dream, my countenance a cerulean blue,

beautiful to the angelic witnesses - like a baby
sleeping, they “ooh” and “ahh,” believing in short
that I myself am an angel, can do no wrong,
and they love me with all of their motherly-hearts.

I dream! I dream! I fly to exuberant heights,
not scared as if I am awake. All of nature curls
about me with its tendrils. Emerald ivy’s not
imposing but a dreamweaver. The sunflower’s

empowered by God’s holy light, not the sun nor
the moon - their xanthous rays’ endorphins induce
laughter, a child’s bravado and curiosity. In
the real world, a slight smile on my powder blue face.

Ruffly and billowing red and pink roses, like
cherubs’ lips brush my dormant cheeks. The kiss
of heights and depths, islands, rivers and life.
I leap into each image - i can smell and taste

the salt, each petal, Eden with all its paint. Fresh
and new, my heartbeat and breath cool and warm
all at once. My mind dancing on ebbs and flows,
swimming with the schools of dolphins and mermaids.

Yes, the dream of rainbow unicorns and scuba diving
with tails and no apparatus. Must I awaken! 
My eyes are fluttering, as if butterflies’ behind them.
The ivy unwinds as pink returns to my countenance.

I’m startled back to reality but then I spy the wings,
coming through my eyes, hear the sound of sand,
snowy seagulls glide, spy spears of golden pineapple
and I’m wise to know I’ve been given more time.

Still of midnight, I glow like sapphire, tee-hee out loud.

8/5/2022
AS I DREAM POETRY CONTEST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 8/15/2022 5:52:00 AM
Fabulous Kim. I re-read this several times - a joy. Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2022 8:04:00 AM
I’m glad you found this worthy of more than one read! <3 Thank you xx
Date: 8/15/2022 1:45:00 AM
A marvelous masterpiece my dear friend Kim. I love and enjoyed immensely this precious gem of yours. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2022 8:04:00 AM
Thank you so much! <3
Date: 8/12/2022 5:18:00 PM
Kim, beautiful writing and congratulations on your win in the contest, blessings ~ Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2022 8:03:00 AM
Thank you <3
Date: 8/12/2022 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations on this win. A creative write/picture. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2022 3:44:00 PM
Thank you, sweet lady! :)
Date: 8/7/2022 10:32:00 PM
Kim, this poem is a dream, an ethereal masterpiece - every line, every stanza written by angels.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2022 3:44:00 PM
Thank you so much <3
Date: 8/7/2022 9:41:00 PM
You are like an ethereal sprite dreaming on and flying to exuberant heights of joy, making the readers also partake in a joy, indescribable . Beautiful poem Kim. All the Best!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2022 3:44:00 PM
Thank you, sweet poet!
Date: 8/6/2022 11:33:00 PM
The leaps and bounds of imagination it takes to write so ethereally and convincingly are a pleasure to behold and bask in for this reader, Kim. Wonderful and Wondrous Verse, gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/7/2022 6:04:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon :)
Date: 8/6/2022 1:46:00 AM
Let me share your dreams. I need such fantasies. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/6/2022 6:56:00 AM
Cheers! <3
Date: 8/5/2022 4:15:00 PM
Sounds like your dreams are fun, Kim. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2022 5:46:00 PM
We will see what the sponsor thinks! Thank you much!
Date: 8/5/2022 12:05:00 PM
I love this beautifully written fantasy, Kim. 'Sweet dreams are made of this,' as the song goes. Good luck in the contest, Evelyn :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2022 3:41:00 PM
Thank you, sweet poet! :)
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